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i was about to start reading until i saw the author name, bruh...i know you most likely gonna delete this.

well i feel you bro...ever since he turns him to edgy and psycho kid who liked to see people kill each other in front of him and the author thought this is cool i know where all this is going. it's unfortunate that such a good plot and characters turned to this

just...what have i read? bruh i need to wash my eyes now. i am a reader and got goosbumbs from the amount of cringe here and i don't want to imaginethe feeling of writing it...overall a mess grammar and writing style with a disgusting mc and lot of emojis while mc crying aloud how he is sad because his wife slept with another bla bla bla...author you can start by reading other novels first see how things work try to understand or even copy their style if you can, stop using imoji on novel because it just disturb the pace and no one likes them. good luck for your next.

Incredible...man i really liked this one, the best villain-type mc you could find. A mature and calculative man who have his goals set clear...didn't give a #### about what others think and isn't your usual filthy villain who just goes about doing pathetic tricks or just straight out attempt to either mind or physically rape the heroines to love him back instead of the protagonist. Even th heroines here doesn't seem the usual braindead like his sister per say. She just reacted bad at first due to the bad past of his predecessor's faults later on she stands by his side as a family does. His way to solve the problems? The best...he tries to solve matters peacefully but once it start to became beyond repair? he just eliminate them. Edgy? Not exactly when the world itself is against him...overall author did a great job to give this fresh and normal mc thrown on chinese-illogocal-type novel, waiting for more chapters.

i don't see how everyone is oc...you are just hating sarada and to this moment he did every character right, sarada really treat naruto as her idol and want to be like him in the original serie, boruto rebellious still the same and hinata and himawari acted as usual, those are the introduced character till now and he did a good job. aside from the strange in ino advanced all seem good.

it wasn't that long since i got disappointed in a naruto fanfic about him jumping to dxd yet here i didn't expect to find a hidden gem, man this version of him is way better than i expected, an op naruto father like we all wished him to be like on the original boruto serie, aside from those strange moments with sarada lol...well not many chapter out yet but i already enjoyed those 20 ch. good writing, nice twist of having that unknown entity helping him out, and overall the characters feels right with only few exceptions like ino strange behaviours. keep the good work author, waiting for more.

A great novel, amazing mc,fml, and a lovely relationships. I enjoyed reading every chapter of it especially that of the old man and the mc...hope he won't die, and even more his relation with the villainess, just the right amount of everything...not too submessive and there is no usual annoyance i found on other novels of the same theme where either the male lead is piece of **** arrogant and lusty for every woman or too passive with hidden cuck fetish. Here you got a drop of everything...action, drama, comedy, tragedy. Freindship, blossoming love, interesting powers and fight scenes. Overall one of the best i've come to read lately. Unfortunately my broken self can't afford the locked chapters lol...anyway you did great job author. Hope that won't change later.

i actually like the idea of naruto tossed there in dxd and all but you nerfed him too much, way too much that his level seems to drop back when he start training with jiraya. ironic how you did him that bad while giving him all those cheats like the rinnegan and the yin yang seal, all the six paths powered and all biju yet he still find it hard to fight a bunch of nobodies from the hero faction. and worse he almost lost in speed battle, like really bro? it would be much interesting if you didn't nerfed him and made him a softie that sona and rias can bark on him as they want. or if madara was there in his stead . overall i enjoyed the first 20 ch until the fight with that persus guy when he nearly kill naruto and ^surprised^ him with speed lol. best luck for your next work bro keep trying.

i agree with what you just said but take a moment and search for antares. his power level, what have he done on the novel, manhwa....after that imagine if that mad man was here. swapped with single move? bruh i'm sure he'll go after great red directly to prove why he is called ^dragon monarch^ where i can't tell the outcome i'm sure he'll survive. now that man himself found himself in troubles when sung jinwoo got after his ass in the dimensional gap chasing after him and his ^dragons^ like crazy. and now he have milions of shadows. that man in dxd? well they would be fuc*ed up if he ddecide t's just right to go against the whole wworld s in dxd he have nothing to lose but everything to take. just my opinion tho.

what is this about?just a bored man asking here