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I’m relieved this fanfic is back, I hope the author doesn’t drop this one. One of my favourite ones on webnovel so far

I really loved this novel, one of the best got fanfics out there. Don’t really know why you want to erase such a masterpiece. It’s a pity.

I thought that too until this chapter. Seems if there’s any chance of Allison being with Tristan, Malia the violent obsessive yandere girlfriend is the biggest obstacle there. Very excited to see how that develops

Maybe he should gain the ability to convert part of his dead shadows strength into his own, maybe if he’s the one who killed them himself, or a tiny percentage if he didn’t.

+1

Wanda and Damien yeees

Doesn’t mean he’ll act as a killer when acting as Batman Dude has to protect himself. Seems more like he’ll help selina kill falcone and pin it on someone else

I was hoping Wanda would be his fifth

I can’t bring myself to read a paragraph this large.

Incorrect. It’s like moving something with your arm, but with your mind instead. With gravity if you make something float then that means you reverse the gravity which means literally no matter how heavy an object is, as long as it is within the reversed gravity, will float. The heavier it is, the faster it would rise.

His powers are related to gravity, not telekinesis. It doesn’t matter how heavy an object is.

Well in that case, maybe when he improves his mental technique he could start to notice oddities and take it from there. Especially if he mixes magic into it.

Well you could still write about it, it it would be best next chapter in a way that depicts something wrong or incomplete that he can recover slowly? Quickly? Before he goes past this stage

Raven. She is a necessity! MAYBE supergirl. Let’s cuck superman and go for Lois lane lol, jokes.

Or premium it completely like some unethical spamming authors?

What is prem?

Burn in the depths of a very very HOT volcano! You could have killed people with heart attacks.

You missed a bunch more letters

With the way his powers work, it should work on any supernatural being instead of just immortals and he gains part of the strength of any he kills, including healing factor and ability to compel etc. The ability to use magic when killing and absorbing witches and the growth of his magic the more witches he kills etc. Maybe you already have a plan to do this. Honestly, since he only gains a small bit of their strength, it makes it incredibly balanced since he doesn’t inherit any weaknesses.

Zatanna and Raven are the absolute must haves. Wonder Woman, maybe. Supergirl, yes Killer frost, would be interesting since she’s kinda villainess yes.