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There are a thousand mediocre revenge stories of all levels everywhere, the merit of this series is how the story is cooked. Go watch your skipped, precocious pubescent videos somewhere else.

Webnovel's sensitive generation, seeing how Oliver's concerns are shown and empathizing with his insecurities and weak emotional moments. Projecting too much. And The Connaisseurs enjoying all the emotional pleasures of literature without prejudice.

Thanks for the update. This slow construction reminds me of NTR SAGAS, I think it is one of the best on this platform. You have a different touch, but it is still early to give an opinion, you are on the right track, I like those fleeting details that anticipate disaster. There is a beautiful guilty pleasure in watching a building come down.[img=recommend]

It refers to details of the flirting or in this case the fall of Heroine Sigrid, I think you're handling it well, maybe you could use hotter verbs, but personally, it reads and feels better that it's gradual, like starting with "it was nice" to "it was concretely existent", something along those lines. I have to reread, I'm already lost how it was coming together in that sense of flirtation, but the NTR plays a lot with the disbelief of the victim (Oliver), those little hints, looks, touches, that they refuse to believe because of their trust in their partner, so for the sake of not seeming baselessly paranoid they keep quiet, which poor emotional Sigrid like any woman in these stories, like overconfident Icarus got burned by the Sun. I don't know how you will handle your story, but NTR is not adultery, it's how they steal or change the Heroine's feelings, Infidelity in reality happens, because the woman didn't give them too much importance to her emotional changes, until it was too late. Oh, and of course the Husband for not appearing weak to his wife, doesn't say anything until it's too late. Don't drop it author, there are many Vanilla stories in the world, you need to read poison not to get diabetes.

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