Your have great writing style. The vivid descriptions make visualizing the action and environment effortless. Your story is very engaging and flows naturally. The characters are well-crafted and memorable, each with their own unique appeal. I don't have a lot of criticism to give. Just only the game notifications a different font: bold or italics. I have only read 2 chapters but I saved your book in my library.
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Your have great writing style. The vivid descriptions make visualizing the action and environment effortless. Your story is very engaging and flows naturally. The characters are well-crafted and memorable, each with their own unique appeal. I don't have a lot of criticism to give. Just only the game notifications a different font: bold or italics. I have only read 2 chapters but I saved your book in my library.
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Fantasy · Time2die