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Ugh, so brutal! I need more! Great work, as always, with this story. Amazing how fast it sucks me in.

I kind of want Uncle Boo to actually be a good guy, just to spite the foreshadowing. It would be a nice change from the betrayal that is likely incoming.

I put this series down for like a month and half while busy at work and over the course if one day I've caught up and hit the wall again. It's just soo good. I already feel it's regained momentum after the last big battle too. I just can't wait to keep reading!

Hopefully this mission goes faster. I'm happy for the time skip, but a little burned out on missions and fighting. Hopefully we can see some more world development. the 13 trials arc feels like it is dragging.

Hmm, author seems too lazy to even come up with a surname. Doesn't bode well for the series.

The MC was a moron fir absorbing all the veins, but what kind of cultivation world is this? "we're going to execute you fir absorbing treasures you found unguarded in the middle of the forest." Like I said, he's a moron, but doesn't that sound a little too ridiculous. I think this author needs a lot of work on his story planning.

Loving the story again now that the weird flashback stuff is over. I'm particularly enjoying Irina's character now. She is still her mouthy self, but tempered in such a way that she's really gained depth. I do hope she gets some of her memories back though.

Classic cultivator. Absorb something without thought to grow more powerful screwing everyone around you. At least he got his. I hope he becomes a little more introspective in the future. Maybe once the town gets wiped out he'll start considering the consequences of his actions instead of acting on every impulse.

It's because the author is dragging it out fir word count, trying to make the MC too dramatic, and still insisting he do everything solo. this could have been done a chapter ago with the help of the rest of the team and less edgy dialog and it would have been more interesting.

I imagine these guys are racking up a lot if favors? After healing everyone in the castle and bringing the queen back to life, I can't imagine Wolfe has any time left on his sentence. Hopefully, the author isn't ignoring the value of the service he will be providing to a dozen demon kings.

Wolfe needs to be requesting a spatial bag for some compensation.

Doesn't this seem a little forced. Just randomly going to genocide a continent because you feel like they shouldn't be there?

Man, if I was the MC, I'd probably already have 27 bunny children by this point. Good on him for his restraint .

You should put an NTR tag on this. It might not be technically accurate, but you just made it so 10 guys are going to be fking his girl. I don't understand how he is not more possessive of what is his.

I hope some detail comes up in future chapters about what could possibly cause such an attack that they'd be willing to use nukes again in a broken world. Sounds a little overkill for an enemy that the author has provided zero motivation for so far.

Love the tension there. Sometimes little acts show more emotion in characters than shouted declarations. The intimate act of fixing his collar show a whole new dynamic in her feelings and behavior towards him.

So I guess he is the strongest in the world now with super extra ultimate god plot armor. Not sure what else there is to write about.

I hope the MC goes out into the world and meets new people at some point instead of just playing with his skills to become a god all by himself except for his clones and his mom. Seems like a waste of a new life. Also, not very interesting when he spends too many chapters just talking to himself and playing with his skill list. I can only hope that if I were to live another life I wouldn't live like a loner shut in.