Moments 6
1yr
Commented The gift that keeps giving. Keep up the good work.
ch 23 Battle of Beasts
Baptism of Blood
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
1yr
Commented Please no! I am having a bad feeling about this.
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Baptism of Blood
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
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Commented Nice start, good scene setting!
ch 0 1 A whole day of Cultivation
Baptism of Blood
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
I think it would be great if you could describe these scenes some more.
As they progress deeper into the cave, the challenges become more intense, and Thale finds himself constantly pushed to his limits. However, he refuses to give up, driven by his desire to become stronger and avenge Elara's death. He continues to fight on, using all of the skills and techniques he has learned to overcome the obstacles in his path.
Baptism of Blood
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix