Nice one pointing it out
She looked like a starving glutton who suddenly found himself choosing between three exquisite dishes.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 Nightmare Begins
Fantasy · Guiltythree
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 Nightmare Begins
Fantasy · Guiltythree
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 4 New Start
Fantasy · Spartzan
The troops can conquer and get you civilians. see [img=strong]
Bro why you ranting. No one can beat the Chinese [img=strong]
Thanks a lot. I was using it to practice to my writing. Let's see about the updates though
It can operate online but it has its memory in a special server somewhere
ch 0 1 The simple visit
Sci-fi · Unchosen
Yes it does. They use it as a nickname for androids. Hope it wasn't confusing?
"Did you kill my husband's andi look alike?"
Sci-fi · Unchosen
Thanks 😊
"No robot shall be made in the likeness of man. For it is an abomination for a machine to look like God." Seun Nnaji.
Sci-fi · Unchosen
I just confirmed now. It is a correct variant of Gallivanting, though it is not commonly used like the normal 'Gallivanting.'
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Action · Demons_and_I
This prologue is a nice and powerful intro to your story. It shows the scale of the universe you created before going ro focus on a single world. Anyway, I am using this paragraph comment to draw your attention to how you spelt gallivanting. A minor error I know, but I thought I should point it out [img=recommend]
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Action · Demons_and_I
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 Kidnapped-1
Fantasy · Indian_Sage1
'Sidesteps' is still correct as sunny is describing himself currently performing the action.
He sidesteps, raising his shadow tachi to intercept the training sword. The two blades met and bit into each other, connected in a bind. He felt the shock of the impact travel through his bones and pushed the sword away — at the same moment as Morgan raised her hands, changing the angle of her weapon and pushing it forward over the tachi.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree