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“The purpose of a storyteller is not to tell you how to think, but to give you questions to think upon." - Brandon Sanderson

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Replied to dynisor

'Sidesteps' is still correct as sunny is describing himself currently performing the action.

He sidesteps, raising his shadow tachi to intercept the training sword. The two blades met and bit into each other, connected in a bind. He felt the shock of the impact travel through his bones and pushed the sword away — at the same moment as Morgan raised her hands, changing the angle of her weapon and pushing it forward over the tachi.

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Nice one pointing it out

She looked like a starving glutton who suddenly found himself choosing between three exquisite dishes.

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Replied to Demons_and_I

Thanks 😊

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Replied to Demons_and_I

I just confirmed now. It is a correct variant of Gallivanting, though it is not commonly used like the normal 'Gallivanting.'

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This prologue is a nice and powerful intro to your story. It shows the scale of the universe you created before going ro focus on a single world. Anyway, I am using this paragraph comment to draw your attention to how you spelt gallivanting. A minor error I know, but I thought I should point it out [img=recommend]

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