JackOfTrades_d10

5mth

Replied to Novachrono_Agares

Well, too bad. It had potential, but sometimes, the author will ruin a story.

"Great," Betty exclaimed. "So, until you reach the age of seventeen, the time when you want to set sail, I want you to work for the Revolutionary Army. It's just four years, not too long, right? This should be acceptable," she added, expressing hope that Ryuma would agree to her proposal.

One Piece: Adventure of a Lifetime

Anime & Comics · Novachrono_Agares

JackOfTrades_d10

5mth

Commented

yep this one

5. Essokinesis Magic: Ex rank. Reality bending magic

Rise of the Immortal Black Dragon King

Anime & Comics · Sol_Pendragon

JackOfTrades_d10

11mth

Commented

Is this on hiatus?

ch 139 Black Fire

Genshin Impact: Icy Path

Video Games · picaco

JackOfTrades_d10

1yr

Commented

Who tf is this?

In front of him, he could see those ruby eyes fixed on him and now that they were near, he was able to discern the peculiar irises' forms, a star on the left one and a moon on the right.

Genshin Impact: Icy Path

Video Games · picaco

JackOfTrades_d10

1yr

Commented

Well... this just got interesting. Is he gonna stay like this?

"Congratulations on becoming the new 11th Harbinger. Columbina, the Colleen."

Genshin Impact: Icy Path

Video Games · picaco

JackOfTrades_d10

1yr

Posted

I have to say this is a perfect example of how a good fanfiction should be. First: The world-building is very good and let's you another side of the pokemon world that you normally wouldn't. Second: The main character although he is with team rocket is nesserally evil, but very down to earth and has a very logical approach to every situation. You can both see and feel the character development of the protagonist and you are curious about what's going to happen next. Last: The only thing that may come across as a problem to some is the small chapters but I believe it's a perfect balance since the author updates daily. As for the main love interest... It isn't bad or good. There was a lot of wasted potential but I don't have a problem with her. Hope this helps.