Thanks for the review, the new chapter is out.
Alrighty
Mhm
ch 0 2 Chapter 1: The Introduction
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thanks
"That doesn't answer anything." He responded, feeling quite annoyed
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understandable. I'll see what I'll do in the next chapter.
the progression of your story feels a bit off, like the story keeps bouncing around many places at once chapter to chapter. the updates are stable, no doubt about it. character and world background are good but the chapters should be much longer.
This book has been deleted.
Thanks!
The Webnovel service is the worst
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