Nathanael_Claytor

4mth

Commented

The first line is wrong. It should say, " Cindy didn't know"Would you PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, update more chapters per day?!?!? Thank You.

ch 757 Chapter 757: Facing Reality

Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!

General · As If Dawn

Nathanael_Claytor

5mth

Commented

CINDY, HER NAME IS CINDY.....NOT WENDY!!!

ch 601 Chapter 601: Can You Substitute for a While

Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!

General · As If Dawn

Nathanael_Claytor

5mth

Replied to Litt13aznd011

Morgan is a HE, as in a Male...NOT a She, a She is a Female

Morgan Zhekova held her cheeks while lamenting, "Why can't there be a family certificate or a reunion certificate since there is a Marriage Certificate? That way I could be included too."

Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!

General · As If Dawn

Nathanael_Claytor

5mth

Commented

Her name is Cindy, Not Wendy....geez!! It's bad enough that boys are referred to as 'She' and girls as 'He'...fix your pronouns...

ch 601 Chapter 601: Can You Substitute for a While

Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!

General · As If Dawn

Nathanael_Claytor

9mth

Posted

There were many wrong names used and wrong genders used throughout the book, and although the ending wasn't awful it definitely didn't tie up all the story lines.

Loved By An Older Man

General · Mountain Springs

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