well this has great starting can hook up reader, I like the par he on the spot resolved magic misunderstanding. please don't make the mc too much involve with og mc quest and focus on his development, and please make girls personality more developed as we won't like to all becoming unreasonable yandere one or two is ok , I like how his fiancee personality has not changed from start and she is playing with him unlike in some other novel where mc make final boss fall in love instantly, got great potential, hope you complete this story as good as you started , good luck
Fantasy · MCPG
Hey this is the best ever pokemon fanfic I have ever read. But due to it not being updated for long time I just wanna ask is this dropped?
Anime & Comics · alex02373
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well this has great starting can hook up reader, I like the par he on the spot resolved magic misunderstanding. please don't make the mc too much involve with og mc quest and focus on his development, and please make girls personality more developed as we won't like to all becoming unreasonable yandere one or two is ok , I like how his fiancee personality has not changed from start and she is playing with him unlike in some other novel where mc make final boss fall in love instantly, got great potential, hope you complete this story as good as you started , good luck
How to survive in the Romance Fantasy Game
Fantasy · MCPG