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I see all the sweetness 😍 My thoughts is that if Song Yan parents were this powerful, their death must have had a lot of complications

The funny thing is, he's looking but never say a word, what's the point? 🤣🤣🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂

I love the story overall and appreciate the great writeup. However, I'm a little conscious about the ages. Like having 12year old kids talking about love and crush even in a childish way. It gives me a lil creep

These little group of rascals trying to annoy their senior. Yi is so jealous and protective of his friend 🤣😂😂

Instead of telling us his birth place, it would have been nice to tell us sometimes in the future after the MC and ML takes a trip to said location. Maybe a flashback.

Hello, I really enjoy reading this story. I am currently pursuing my Master's degree in Canada and English is my official language. I also enjoy writing romance novels and have a fairly good understanding of how to write and edit. Therefore, I am happy to proofread or edit your work for free. It's a fantastic story that could be improved with a few edits.

That brief moment of attraction between the Male leads❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

The building that can fly? Love it

I have similar questions

This took a surprising turn

I also like the relationship between the two boys. They're too young to fan for themselves and I hope Yi never bretray Yan

I'm so sad that he give away the wolf. I thought he would raise it to be his partner, how frustrating 😤

I hope this book gets adapted into an series. How can we support that to happen? I love it and it's so different and bring a fresh new perspective to readers

I already love San Yan..Nice write-up

This chapter and Yan blow my mind. I LOVE IT. He's far too mature for his age and the mystery is exciting

The chapter is quite engaging but too many information especially on the division of sects and realms. Not easy to follow.