Moments 11
Kim dokja reference???
And though he and I were the exact opposite, seeing someone stand up no matter how badly he fell comforted me.
The Extra's Odyssey
Fantasy · Ryukurou
The Iconic plot or the classic plot or classic mc should i say.
It was a cliché novel about a protagonist's losing his family and everything else. When he was a kid, he lost everything during the invasion of other races. Yet, he still never gave up. The protagonist strived to become strong to protect others so that no one would have to lose their loved ones.
The Extra's Odyssey
Fantasy · Ryukurou
Relatable As always :C
"When will that auth- no piece of trash upload again?"
The Extra's Odyssey
Fantasy · Ryukurou
About the part There was no land no sky no earth nothing. You can improve it by doing simply There was no land, sky and earth nothing. Much better.
There was no land, no sky, no earth, nothing. Emptiness encompassed everything, solely occupied by the auroras.
The Extra's Odyssey
Fantasy · Ryukurou
A Part we all do.
Some were holding hands while some were feeding each other. It was a sweet but cringe view. As someone without a girlfriend, Ren can only curse his luck of being single.
The author's dream
Realistic · Killerbee
Yeah part of this wrong is most teenager or highschool students drink a coffee
"Yeah, most of the high school students can't drink a coffee."
The author's dream
Realistic · Killerbee
Although some part was confusing but the thing that got me confused the most is is nakai sensei a male or female since there we're no he or she meantioning about his/her gender although other than that Keep up the good work as always.
ch 0 7 Chapter 6. Thoughts
The author's dream
Realistic · Killerbee
This part about his mother nagging it give's me the creep since my mom would always scold about my attidude and my personality it always took long.
Ren simply nodded at his mother's words and noticing that, his mother nagging continued.
The author's dream
Realistic · Killerbee
You can add something in this part like "Are you worried about something? said Shiki sensei."
"Are you worried about something? Shiki sensei."
The author's dream
Realistic · Killerbee
It's very nice and detailed I rate it 7/10 I never rated 10/10 before so yeah remember No one's perfect except your love of your life
ch 0 3 Chapter 2. Rebirth (2)
The author's dream
Realistic · Killerbee
Alright a company called spam amazon meaning spam orders
My name is Birito Hondakawasuzuyota and until today I was just a normal Japanese salaryman. For 5 years I worked for the global delivery giant Spamazon, and my job was to drive one of their small delivery trucks throughout Tokyo and the surrounding area. Sometimes I delivered items of value, but most of the time I was delivering video games, body pillows, and erotic manga to sweaty Otakus who live in tiny cluttered apartments.
That Time I Got Isekai’d To Another World With My Truck!!
Fantasy · RantCafe