New author and trying my best to create an enjoyable read.
2023-01-11 Joined Indonesia
Thanks for the input! I will consider doing a poll in the future if I'm uncertain about something, but for now your words have made me quite confident with the current pacing. I guess it's a bit difficult to judge the pacing and perhaps other elements of the story from the author's perspective. Anyway, thank you for your constant support and have a nice day :)
ch 32 To Kill Time
Fantasy · Bosaliong
I've thought about calories before (Drai ate a lot of meat back at home) but haven't considered it for further down the story. Thanks for the reminder! Although I don't think it will be noteworthy enough as a plot point, I might include it in passing or in the details. I'm a bit concerned about the pacing of the plot (I'm afraid it's too slow for some readers), so I might glance at the details regarding locations or even during conversations (I'll still try to make them sound rather realistic). What do you think? Is the pacing too slow for you?
ch 32 To Kill Time
Fantasy · Bosaliong
I hadn't thought about that but it's definitely similar to that, minus the kids
ch 33 At Ravi's Mansion
Fantasy · Bosaliong
I searched for the lyrics and it led to a pretty amusing music video lol
ch 29 Body Transformation 1
Fantasy · Bosaliong
You're welcome! Thank you for the support :)
ch 29 Body Transformation 1
Fantasy · Bosaliong
I'm glad you enjoy them. You're welcome!
ch 29 Body Transformation 1
Fantasy · Bosaliong
You're welcome! Sorry for the late update, I've been feeling under the weather these couple days
ch 29 Body Transformation 1
Fantasy · Bosaliong
That was the intention. Thankfully it did slap
"Christopher Leopold Titus Jean-Claude Maglan!"
Fantasy · Bosaliong
Don't worry, he'll lose his naivety as he experience the world more. But I don't know if he can be as smart as Christo. His genes are lacking :P
"Then it's all good," Drai replied as he smiled. Now he wouldn't have to think hard whenever Jian talked.
Fantasy · Bosaliong
Okay! Thanks for the support :)
ch 27 The Shocking and the Brewing
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I wonder if the readers would hate it if I really pair up Drai with a bulky woman :P
ch 26 A Brief Chat With Paul
Fantasy · Bosaliong
Thank you so much!
ch 26 A Brief Chat With Paul
Fantasy · Bosaliong
Ah I just read this after replying. Thanks for the suggestion, I'll keep that in mind! But if I can't exactly incorporate all your suggestions, I apologize in advanced
ch 24 Before the First Class
Fantasy · Bosaliong
Okay then, I'll find a way to use "Halo" as a character name. It will probably be a side character, as I have already established the main cast. Do you have any suggestions or wishes for the character? If not, I'll just try to not make him an antagonist :P
ch 24 Before the First Class
Fantasy · Bosaliong
No, since it's an AI art. I resorted to AI due to time and budget constraint, but if the novel gets traction later on, I'll commission my friend to make a proper cover art.
ch 24 Before the First Class
Fantasy · Bosaliong
You're welcome! Sorry if it's a bit short. I had a friend visit from out of town, so I had to make do with quite a limited time.
ch 24 Before the First Class
Fantasy · Bosaliong
"So I say thank you for the music, the songs I'm singing Thanks for all the joy they're bringing Who can live without it? I ask in all honesty What would life be?" ABBA - Thank You for the Music
Meanwhile, Drai didn't feel anything in particular. In the first place, he wasn't patriotic, since he was never interested in Rivideria's history and politics. Furthermore, he also wasn't particularly interested in music. So, Drai viewed Elena's magnificent performance as trivial.
Fantasy · Bosaliong
You're very welcome! Thank you for your kind words, as they have given me extra motivation. I sometimes doubt certain aspects of my writing; so, knowing that some people do enjoy the novel helps easing me of my worries. I hope I can live up to your support and expectations. Cheers! :)
ch 21 The Casualties of a Preoccupation
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You're welcome! I've been slightly struggling in writing the recent chapters due to all the occurring developments, but I hope it's still enjoyable for all of the readers. Thank you for your support :)
ch 35 Quelling the Heightened Situation
Seed of Titan
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