Vishisht_Magan - Profile

Ah yes, Severus Snape and the Merodeators, truly an endearing cast

OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE SHOUTOUT, you kinda got my name wrong but nevermind, THANK YOU SO MUCH, MAN I LOVED YOUR STORY AND I AM THANKFUL THAT MY VOTE HELPED, EVEN IF A LITTLE BIT, I HOPE YOU FINISH THIS STORY ONE DAY AND I PROMISE TO GIVE ALL THE POWER STONES I CAN

Bruh, isn't CAT for undergrad though 😅, SAT is for Foreign admissions, are you thinking of applying to foreign? anyways um you can check out my fanfic about Severus Snape, it's the Gestaltation of Severus Snape, if you are interested in that 😅😂.

Hey man you are an Indian right? How much did you get in boards? Amazing fanfic!! Are u giving JEE Advanced? I am also a writer and I gotta say I loved your work. I am having trouble managing both writing and and studying for entrance, how r u holding up?

The chapter length has been short, Arthur is like a Gary Stu Malfoy felt OOC, and the OCs lack any contribution towards the story, but I think what your strengths are the OCs themselves, Iris feels like a great mentor and her feud with Dumbledore and Lily can be expanded on and while Elias may feel like a Ron, he is different in the way that he would be what you would expect from a side character that actually helps and contributes, sort of like Hermione but without the annoying traits, the mystery, suspense, and world-building, now I know Harry Potter is an already established world but your focus on the story of Arthur and the consequences of the actions of the previous generation we find out gradually, is impeccable. Let me know what type of Author you want to be and what your goals are, I might be able to help. I have deep knowledge regarding tropes.

My guy this story is amazing, don't drop it please, you are doing great, i love it, you will become a great author, please just don't drop the story, i really want to know more about Snape's impact on this world, and if you turn this into a series, then let me tell you, your world building is amazing, please please please dont drop it

Tsugikuni-san's personality is different. Yoriichi doesn't have a presence and he would never get angry. Please correct that. This fanfic has potential don't ruin it, Unlike other One Piece swordsman that have a battle spirit and overwhelming presence, Yoriichi doesn't, thus he can become very strong. Good Job though, you have a potential to become a great writer

Ok, thank you for mentioning Lily, I can't wait to see Arthur interacting with Lily, please continue with the fanfic, I'm loving it very much, just wished the chapters were a bit longer, but honestly I am loving this, thank you so much. You are doing quite well for an amateur author, keep working hard, you will become a great author one day [img=recommend]

When will we see Lily? I am curious as to what happened to her? Is she still Harry's mother? Does she miss Severus, does she regret choosing James over Severus?