Webnovel Author: TenmaName - Novel Collection

Thanks for the advice, I was recommended to use them too by a friend and I trying using more bot chatting to get used typing in English. I'll keeping writing the story likewise with those helps ;D

It's First-person description a problem as well?

Thanks for the reviews, as you can see my english is very poor. I want to know, anything about the story itself? And if you have good tip for writing?