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The most eye catching problem is you use so many unnecessary explanations for ex. me learning about star gods maidens toughts in such lenght made your quality of writing drops down significantly

Good so far character developing .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I don't know why people didn't liked this one but this is really good. I think it is a little slow paced but not that much sex stuff takes a while to start though