I think the story has great potential, but it would be better if it moved at a little bit faster of a pace and the grammar wasn't so hard to read. I want to continue, but at the same time you have to practically rearrange whole sentences to understand them.
Fantasy · mata0eve
major fail for an ending
ch 26 Chapter 32: Mother Needs Money
Urban · Tabatha_Taylor_6473
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
I think the story has great potential, but it would be better if it moved at a little bit faster of a pace and the grammar wasn't so hard to read. I want to continue, but at the same time you have to practically rearrange whole sentences to understand them.
The Demon’s Bride
Fantasy · mata0eve