Gonna be honest, this left a bad taste in my mouth. Gonna continue, but we'll see. In truth, I don't dislike this idea in and of itself. However, in my opinion you chose a bad time for it. Not plot wise necessarily, but timing? If this had been earlier in the story it would be easy, and if we had reached some kind of conclusion of ANY sort with her story it would suck less. However here it felt like she JUST got to the starting line so to speak and got killed by MARYSE of all people... Fingers crossed for the next few chapters
ch 57 Consequences of a Death
Fantasy · Chiken_Sheep
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Gonna be honest, this left a bad taste in my mouth. Gonna continue, but we'll see. In truth, I don't dislike this idea in and of itself. However, in my opinion you chose a bad time for it. Not plot wise necessarily, but timing? If this had been earlier in the story it would be easy, and if we had reached some kind of conclusion of ANY sort with her story it would suck less. However here it felt like she JUST got to the starting line so to speak and got killed by MARYSE of all people... Fingers crossed for the next few chapters
ch 57 Consequences of a Death
A World of Reincarnators
Fantasy · Chiken_Sheep