As my family and I returned home from hunting, I paused and dropped the deer I was holding as a vision appeared in my mind.
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Thanks for the suggestion. I will try it.
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In his previous world, Edmund was an avid fan of the Deadpool character. Following his transmigration, he's emulating that persona as a means to alleviate stress and tension. However, you need not worry, for in the next chapters, his interactions with others will grow, and the frequency of this behavior will naturally diminish as he becomes more engaged in his daily life.
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I think you have a misconception because I still haven't disclosed Nari's real identity and her background. Did you miss the 'system' and 'overpowered' tags in the story? So Severus will become overpowered in the story, and he needs to become overpowered as someone special is waiting for him.
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I've broken up the long paragraphs in Chapter One, as you suggested. I've also edited some parts to try to make them more readable.
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Thanks for the review. I will break the long paragraphs as you said.
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If he dies in the Harry Potter world, he will return to his previous world because he came to the Harry Potter world for a vacation.
ch 0 2 Apology for the Delay: An Important Update
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Sorry if my story disappointed you. I structured it this way because he was alone in the room, which is why he was conversing with readers and his assistant in his mind. Being an extrovert, he couldn't remain silent. Additionally, I intended to provide a basic introduction to 'Edmund Hart' and his life in the previous world, as it is going to play an important role. Don't worry; in the next chapter, he will start interacting with other characters and taking action in the new world.
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Thanks for understanding. Don't worry, I will schedule updates from the next chapter.
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ch 0 5 Chapter 5 - A New Player In Town II
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ch 0 1 Chapter 1: 'New World' [Revised]
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Yes
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The next chapter will be published on next Monday馃槉
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As always a great chapter author 馃憣馃憣馃憣馃構.. But why did you removed this story from your YouTube channel?馃
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