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cmluis

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cmluis
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Commented

you could delete half of this and still get the point across.

Uncertainty and fear took hold of him, filling his heart with anguish. But in the midst of the darkness, a small spark of determination ignited within Jacob. He knew he couldn't let himself be defeated by adversity.

The Orb of Worlds without Limits: Alice in Borderland

The Orb of Worlds without Limits: Alice in Borderland

Movies · SrCuervo

cmluis
10mth
Replied to Dragon_Rage93

I tried cutting out unnecessary dialogue tags, but will get back to this later.

"Evelyn, it is indeed true. I have come to Egypt for that very purpose—to search for individuals knowledgeable about that place, form a team, and embark on an exploration."

In The Movie Worlds With My System - Fixed Grammar Version

In The Movie Worlds With My System - Fixed Grammar Version

Movies · cmluis

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cmluis
10mth
Replied to Microraptor

please leave a correction if you find it haha.

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I Hate the Communist Party

I Hate the Communist Party

History · cmluis

cmluis
10mth
Commented

dark humor????!?!?!?

"A thrilling movie that combines dark humor and horror-thriller elements. The plot subtly suggests the unintentional discrimination of white people towards black people and questions the prejudice that assumes black people should be physically strong."

After Acquiring Marvel, I Became the King of Hollywood

After Acquiring Marvel, I Became the King of Hollywood

Urban · Yeeetoo

cmluis
10mth
Commented

this author was smoking zaza for sure.

"Refreshing! This is a movie that black people must watch. White people don't have to, but if black people don't, I can say that you are betraying your race. Speak up for black people, and they will fully support you. Keep it up, Director Kevin!"

After Acquiring Marvel, I Became the King of Hollywood

After Acquiring Marvel, I Became the King of Hollywood

Urban · Yeeetoo

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cmluis
10mth
Replied to In_destructible

Mongrel??

"What is the proper name for the offspring of a human and a god?" Mr. Brunner inquired.

In The Movie Worlds With My System - Fixed Grammar Version

In The Movie Worlds With My System - Fixed Grammar Version

Movies · cmluis

cmluis
10mth
Replied to Adramelech

Idk, I don't think so.

"He still has 13 days to return the bolt to me," Zeus stated firmly. "Otherwise, war shall ensue."

In The Movie Worlds With My System - Fixed Grammar Version

In The Movie Worlds With My System - Fixed Grammar Version

Movies · cmluis

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cmluis
10mth
Replied to Westley86

they are two diff people the dialogue was just a bit stuffed.

cmluis
10mth
Replied to Westley86

I'll just stick to the original source it's not that big of a deal haha.

Hearing that, Alex thought, 'So I came to Resident Evil. I didn't watch the last movie, so I don't know how the virus destroyed. I'm in the hive where everything began, and Alice is here, my favorite actor.'

In The Movie Worlds With My System - Fixed Grammar Version

In The Movie Worlds With My System - Fixed Grammar Version

Movies · cmluis

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cmluis
10mth
Replied to SorryImJustDiamond

This would be even better without the Vtuber element. Make her more interesting maybe?

"The truth is, Napoleon, I came from the future," Ciela revealed and Napoleon's eyes widened at the revelation.

Reincarnated as Napoleon

Reincarnated as Napoleon

History · SorryImJustDiamond

cmluis
10mth
Replied to SorryImJustDiamond

neat.

Ciela chuckled at Napoleon's suggestion, finding his attempt at humor endearing. "Bonaparte's code, huh? Well, it does have a nice ring to it," she replied with a smile. "Well, it is your invention so you have the right to name it whatever you like. Speaking of invention, you don't have a prototype right? Since my money is your money, I will give you the funds to make a prototype. And once you have the prototype, we can demonstrate it to the French Academy of Sciences."

Reincarnated as Napoleon

Reincarnated as Napoleon

History · SorryImJustDiamond

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cmluis
10mth
Commented

Napoleons's Code sounds cooler.

Ciela chuckled at Napoleon's suggestion, finding his attempt at humor endearing. "Bonaparte's code, huh? Well, it does have a nice ring to it," she replied with a smile. "Well, it is your invention so you have the right to name it whatever you like. Speaking of invention, you don't have a prototype right? Since my money is your money, I will give you the funds to make a prototype. And once you have the prototype, we can demonstrate it to the French Academy of Sciences."

Reincarnated as Napoleon

Reincarnated as Napoleon

History · SorryImJustDiamond

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