Spectre419

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I really like this story. Please keep writing it.

ch 107 Internal Improvements

A Serpent's Tale

Fantasy · Wyvers

Spectre419

1mth

Posted

I love this so far. not much there but this has potential. Please keep updating!

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Spectre419

1mth

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Thanks for the chapter.

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Spectre419

1mth

Commented

See, now I feel dumb haha. Literally the next line lol.

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Spectre419

1mth

Commented

What is an apule? Did you mean "apple" here?

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Spectre419

1mth

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This story is fucking amazing. Things have a purpose, events don't get forgotten, the world has depth. More than just the H, I love this.

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Spectre419

4mth

Posted

I honestly really like it. There are some parts near the beginning that are pretty dark, but they are well done. The grammar isn't the best, most of it is good, but some places just have silly mistakes. All in all, I would recommend it. The author is building a really cool world that I want to see more of. Author, I know your not happy with some portions, but please continue writing this. You're doing a good job.

A Serpent's Tale

Fantasy · Wyvers

Spectre419

4mth

Commented

I'm not gonna tell you to stop feeling how you feel, but remember to look at what you have. You're making something special here, don't give up just yet my dude. You're doing a good job.

ch 87 Cythistia's Troubles