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It’s ok to show that they love each other but to much nsfw can ruin unless the book is based around but with your books title I feel that you should sprinkle some spice here and there. I feel that if someone were to read the title and is like oh the book is about a mc and their girl friend, so don’t do to much but also don’t do to little as in don’t make them date then don’t do anything with it (I hate how much this happens in anime/manga) I don’t know hard it is being a writer trying to do a story with also romance blend together but with the story is going I like it but IMO I would like a little more romance between the two

I would not be surprised if lux made the beast his pet

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So glad to have you back man I hope you’re doing well love the book

I hope I’m not being annoying but is there a reason that you don’t have the mc use his battle gear anymore. Do you not know what to do with it or got rid of it to nerf aldred to make sure he’s not to powerful or did you not like it and gave new armor as a replacement

Feel bad for our Mc everyone deserves to be loved even if it takes time to find the right one. I don’t want to see him walk this path alone imo. great chapter

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