Flowers Need Time To Bloom. So Do You. 馃
2023-01-22 Joined Global
Little grammatical mistake. 馃き
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Me wants too :3
She ate some hot cup noodles that Meghan prepared for her and snacked on an orange as she described the main building and the library to Meghan. The two girls decided to meet up with George tomorrow and peruse the entire library. They were all bookworms and Ana loved that.
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What a nice man 馃ゲ
He noticed that her pace had slowed down compared to earlier. 'She must be exhausted.' He thought. He hoped she had enough energy to eat some food before she fell asleep and just like that, his thoughts abruptly drifted to how she would look if she was sleeping peacefully.
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"Thank you." Anaya smiled politely at Maeve and started to walk out, in a rush to feed herself and just lie down for a while. She felt weak and she just wanted a good rest more than anything else.
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I would only nod too 馃き
Anaya nodded. Her erratic heartbeat slowing down at his words. She took a deep breath and exhaled. She saw Maeve walking over with the injection and she quickly took Khai's hand and closed her eyes tightly shut.
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Anaya widened her eyes at how Maeve spoke to the young man, but she looked up at him to see that he was hardly bothered.
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Anaya tried to get her hand out of his grip, but her attempt was so weak that she gave up after trying twice. His grip wasn't harsh and the feeling of his hand on hers didn't really bother her. She briefly wondered why, before the pain consumed her thoughts.
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So gentle 馃ス
Khai stretched to grab her keys and helped her up, careful not to hurt her while holding all her weight. She was a little more than feather light, he noticed.
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Khai's eyes moved from her upset face to her bloodied hand and felt his own blood run cold. He rushed to his knees and held her hand in his, examining the wound while trying to calm himself down. There they were, the sparks he felt from earlier. But he easily ignored them at the sight of her blood.
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Why is she also so pretty?
Her eyes were a mesmerizing hazelnut color, with flecks of gold and green that seemed to dance in the light. Her skin was pale and as smooth and delicate as porcelain, with a warm, rosy glow that made her appear both ethereal and alive. Her features were delicate and refined, with a pointed chin and a small, straight nose. Her lips were full and pink, and her eyes were framed by long, dark lashes. She was a vision of beauty, with an air of mystery and allure that was hard to resist.
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Me wants to find it
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The first chapter so captivating, author 馃ズ
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
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I wanna hug her 馃ズ
The toddler in Tricia's arms sensed her fear and started to cry. She tried to soothe her child while holding her protectively against her heart. She wanted to scream and shout at the injustice that her life had come to. Her eyes turned to Lyra, silently begging for help. Lyra simply scoffed, raising her chin to look down at her brother's family that she loathed.
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"Enough!" One of the Soul Guardians stepped forward. "Step aside Lyra. We aren't here to fulfill your personal grudge."
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Pretty
Tricia looked at Lyra with a stoic expression. Lyra was Lucan's step-sister and while they did look somewhat alike, she was nothing like him. Her black long hair glistened against her olive skin and her full lips were set into a thin line. Her almond eyes looked at Tricia and her daughters, trying to burn a hole into them.
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Thank you very much! 馃挏
Nice opening and interesting synopsis. 馃槉 Only few grammatical mistakes that could be easily fixed by the author. It鈥檚 hard to comment much on the story because only few chapters are out, but the author鈥檚 writing is promising. Looking forward to your updates. 馃槍
The Maid 'N' Princess of the Eclipse
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