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the author done a very good job with football details and stuff. but, he seems to forget that the mc is actually a person but not Robot. common man, his girlfriend has Miscarriage but mc seems not even remember about it the next day, and he goes to play game. the guy got second life after dying alone, but only thinks about football and nothing else, I mean I know it a sport novel, but common, at least let him live some good moments of life other than training and stuff. overall it's Hard for me to pick after authors recent hitus, author should improve on charectar designing and building, because there is no way a person who died and came back to life will behave like the mc you're currently writing.

This was such a good story in the early chapters, and the large harem just ruined everything for me. it feels like author made this Harem to make this novel special but he ultimately failed. and the excuse of vahn not being able to learn what is love and like is just simply stupid. I mean it might work for the first world but why the hell did take all other girls even after he experienced what is love is. the novel just failed to develop an interesting and unique love stories, because you will know probably every girl vahn meets will end up with him .despite bring a free novel, i just got really tired of this repeatative romance were the character I read this chapter will simply br forgotten in just a few chapters, so i am dropping it