Thomas_Thompson_6514 - Profile

I enjoy the consistency of the updates, so I really appreciate that. Sometimes in the story, I get lost and have to reread it to understand, but I think that's just me. The jokes, while sometimes out of place, I still enjoy. I think doing what you're doing in the way you want is a good idea. I can't really suggest anything because I'm not a writer, but I'll keep reading if you keep updating.