Maria_Graef

1yr

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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

ch 93 Bonus Chapter II - The Christmas chaos

The Pack's Weirdo : A Mystery to unveil

Fantasy · Mudita Upreti

Maria_Graef

1yr

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using the word doubts, is confusing. Thinks maybe, suspects that.... doubts makes it seem de definitely disbeives he's a white wolf. buy I like the twist. there other confusing sentences in your writing, but I get it right away and forget to mention it. I am enjoying you book and bought the remaining chapters.

"He doubts that dee is a white wolf."