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I’m not talking about the backgrounds… I mean the plot, every chapter reminds of a plot I’ve read countless times.… all plots in the novel have been used too many times in different novels that it becomes generic or cliché… there’s nothing surprising at all, you can literally guess the end of a plot at the beginning…(well no romance or harem tag so it’s bearable)

Unique??? How ?🤨 I keep getting deja vu while reading each chapter🫤

lol…. He can just abduct a woman for reproduction...

You’re right… the nano machine has the ability copy and analyze moves, but the mc might not be able to use them if he does not have the force qi to perform it, i.e demonic force qi or ice force qi. (But he can analyze it to search for the weaknesses or use it as a reference to create a new martial art) but it’s not possible for the mc to be helpless before the protagonist, the mc has ‘divine talent’ which means he can analyze martial arts too and create one easily, infact the talent is beyond comprehension. So as the nano machine copies and analyze hus moves, he is doing so too and to everyone. the rule of not killing the protagonist just makes things interesting.…

I don’t only dislike tang san but I dislike all seven of the shrek devils and everyone associated with them. But if you ask who I hate the most, it will be xiao wu… anybody with a decent amount of iQ can see that she’s incredibly stupid; I mean gaining human form and leaving home just to fall in love with a human, the same humans who kills the soul beast’s she so much loves. like wtf 🤬 who does that, a normal person put in her position will be planning revenge or at least trying to stop the massacre of her race, but she was busy having fun with the same soul masters who hunt them down. Such a stupid and naïve character is supposed to die.(well it’s impossible with plot amor) The reason I dislike tang san is not because he’s wrong or something like that, it just because to me he is too emotional and I find it hard to connect with over emotional characters, the only feeling I have for him is disdain.

you’re welcome 💯

I would suggest you stay and build a world properly instead of world hopping every few chapters and properly introduce the system and his cheat, make full use of them and not waste the potential and give a highlight on what kind of person the mc is, as it’s a villain tag then just introduce his character like what a villain supposed to be, not some second or third rate villain though, I mean A REAL VILLIAN one who acts on his interests without considering anyone and with no justification for his actions; it should simply be ”I wanted it and I got/did it or it’s within my interests and beneficial to me" And give the mc a goal e.g strength above all, strength while doing whatever I want, or to do whatever I want. A personal advise: don’t go Pokémon(harem) or spoil it with romance and don’t make him a simp…. study about the world the mc will travel to before writing about it. Goodluck 👍 Will give it a try to check for improvements.

The novel has no plot or even a description of the mc, his character, goal or anything at all…overall it’s just messy.

Wanted to read this… but hearing about romance in a novel with a villian tag is disappointing. Can’t you authors write a novel without involving romance 😕

Around what chapter does the mc become a villain ?

A very good novel, words alone are not enough to describe this masterpiece, so I’ll just stop by advising everyone to give this a try. good work….. keep it up author 👍

Alright….….. I will be waiting 👍

Nice novel, with good world building a little mystery and an interesting plot, but above all, I like the character of the mc. The only problem is the updates. Author try to post updates regularly. Can’t wait to read more😁

I don’t agree with you on that… There’s more purpose in the mc’s existence than killing the protagonist. Like he could do whatever he wants since he has the power, world domination and many other goals to achieve…. Only when his existence is all based on killing the protagonist that it becomes boring because once he achieves that, he loses his sense of existence and the story becomes bland.