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Hope all is well Author-kun. I fell in love with the potential this story could have been a literal 100 chp minimum continuing with the development of the Mc and his family throughout the years. I really hope that you bring this back from hiatus and continue with the story please. Also if you bring this back please remove the part with the god asking him to fight a dragon and rewards him the dimensional traveling powers. That isn’t really needed for this type of book, it make be necessary for legacies if you have the Mc marry Hayley and let Hope become his child.

•Mc suppose to be a reincarnation with memories but it didn’t feel that way. •The story just stalling on the kamina arc as the author seems to be indecisive on whether to kill Matt before Gerard does or not, given the multiple failed attempts (which were total pointless as he could have killed him from the beginning) it seems Gerard would kill him. •The Mc character development came to a complete halt after his breakup with Quinn and he keeps becoming more distant as the chapter goes on. This is also disappointing as he’s a “reincarnator” with knowledge but doesn’t utilize it. •Why is he so fucking weak he’s a bloody hybrid for fucks sake. But whenever he’s in battle with a hunter all he does is talk mighty, breaks 2 hunters necks before being gunned down. And why would he go confront Peter so stupidly in the hospital •Lastly this story is being dragged by fishing for too many unnecessary drama. Mc forever in a sulking mood over a breakup that occurred months ago, the repeated failures in kill Matt(this should have been done the following chapter after Chase was outside his house), the major foreshadowing rift between Chase and Allison where I’m sure that in the following chapters there gonna have a big fight for what he did to her mother which would escalate cuz of MCs edgy behavior. •Say it again Mc is reincarnated let his memory run normal and whenever something happens to him he mysteriously remembers which part of the show he’s in.

Was good but then went straight to the gutters. You really fucked it up by making him lose his alpha power and dying just to show to make reasons on why he’s a true alpha????? I’m not even an writer and come with better ways that shit show you displayed.