Options for betas: Stiles, Danny,Greenburgh(gotta admit it would be funny😂) and probs create 2 OCs to join the pack. If Allison is gonna be a Luna then she should probs be bitten. Mc giving her the choice around the time he tells her about her family and the supernatural, which is between episodes before Kate dies. Not wanting the relationship to be ruined the Scott’s from the show, her tells her everything including about killing her aunt. Just my thoughts but overall great chapters !!!!!
ch 0 7 Character abilities
TV · Mr_Fruitless
Why flex your money so stupidly. The clubs selling price was just over 11 million and could have taken the offer as 20 million there was no need to raise it to 30 million. In the future please reframe from spending more than the actual cost. It feels like I’m reading an arrogant Chinese novel.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Anime & Comics · Legend_Man_1262
Just why????? It was good until Mc started licking Yang Kai and taking him as a disciple. The story was moving too fast and now forcibly slowing down the story by trying to implement new plots that makes no sense😐 Why would you transmigrate to a world where you’re supposed to be the only reincarnator just to have it open to the public on earth where soon worlds would be merged It’s really pathetic and should be left for a new story. Mc should have already moved back to the upper realm and not continue to waste time in the lower realm dog licking Yang Kai.
ch 10 Yang kai becomes disciple,and letter from the omnipotent being?
Anime & Comics · HeavenlyDemonGodz
Yup if he wasn’t the MC with plot armor he would be dead already
I looked to skyline in disappointment whilst tears spilt out in misery, "Mannn I'm starting to think I'm dumb for not selecting his memories - just a bit."
Anime & Comics · Honoured_Writer
Iris for the last 6 weeks had been a total wreck, filled with guilt over the fact that she had slept with Naruto while still with Eddie, to make up for it she's been going above and beyond in their relationship while also trying to not be to pushy, or clingy.
TV · SarmelAC
No wonder this was dropped. Some of those wishes he could have done by himself just wasting a whole wish. Didn’t even wished about your weakness.
ch 0 1 1 Meeting the goddess of reincarnation
Fantasy · Reapers_Edge
This is the 3rd random novel I have read where a Sharingan is wished for. You are writing a cultivation novel, Naruto aspects can be atleast left out and keep the wishes cultivation or world appropriate
"Third, I desire the Sharingan, a powerful eye technique from the world of anime. But I want it without the curse of inevitable blindness, for I wish to embrace both power and longevity."
Book&Literature · Heavens_Sovereign
Really dude?????? This is Apothoesis and not Naruto, there are so many relevant inate cultivation skills to choose from🤦🏾♂️
[Innate Skill]: Eternal Mangekyô Sharingan
Anime & Comics · TeneT
Between Emperor and Saint Realm
Your excuse as comparing Mc to be the same as how Kaneki was in the beginning as weak doesn’t make sense at all. Firstly Kaneki was oblivious to everything and didn’t know how to use his powers whereas our Mc has watched Tokyo Ghoul and should know how to use his powers. Mc is just getting straight up nerfed because of ignorance
ch 12 Tests 1
TV · IamAlwaysListless
How did they solve the Merger issue between Lizzie and Josie
ch 59 Ch.59 Wedding Bells (Important Announcement)
TV · confused4you
It’s all fun and games compelling to get a experience car free, until auditing is done and they realize it was stolen
The next day you could see a car pull into the school parking lot; everyone had one thought in mind: who could afford that car? It's worth at least a million dollars.
Fantasy · Aaron_Brooks_9528
I’m not sure but this first time interaction seems a little forced. Any person who watched Orginals would have know that Marcel wouldn’t allow him to meet hope so easily also being a total stranger and he would have been attacked immediately after mentioning her
ch 0 2 Chasing Hope
Others · LivingInShameless
What a looney tunes moment 🤣🤣
Soon she was flabbergasted as she witnessed something unusual, married couples started having sex on the rooftop making a scandalous around the neighborhood, it seems Ezekiel and Allison ignited their passion once again!
TV · TheLonelyGod
Bro that could have been handled way better, now it feels like you’re trying to force some drama into the story. Should have explained to her the backstory of her family and then offer her the bite with something along those lines. Now you’re just tear Allison away from you and bring more drama between the argents that never existed with the MC and no way this is gonna be forgivable within season 1. My advise is that unless you have a clear understanding of what you’re trying to do with the story is to rewrite the ending of this chapter. Really don’t wanna lose a good book
ch 12 Chapter 10 - Allison's birthday & Impulsive action
TEEN WOLF - Born Alpha
TV · Mr_Fruitless