Badges 6
Moments 33
I've decided this entire world needs to die, someone call Cathulu and tell him it's lunch time.
"Look at you all nervous faces, staring at me as though I'm some sort of monster."
I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
Talent has NOTHING to do with if a serum designed to do a job does the job. If his cells had a deficiency/flaw that would make more logical sense. Please learn what words are and what they mean before you use them.
He couldn't help but be a little depressed. Genes and talent play a massively vital role in cell activation.
I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
Because the plot go brrrr
Another part of him questioned what if it was all true? Then he'd have to find this girl, Sia. His only source of information on her — his dreams — revealed she is a cadet of the Earth Imperial Defense Academy, Defense Academy in short.
Divine Path System
Fantasy · _Transcendent
...wow the is horrible, you have to be asleep to have a dream. Mind blown, I never would have known if not for this sentence sat as it's own paragraph...
The only good silver lining was the dreams only occurred when he was asleep.
Divine Path System
Fantasy · _Transcendent
Even a fodder ability of a technical final evolution of hollows should have zero effort to crush two full evolutions then him. Let's look at the series, Ichigo and Uryu took care of a Gillian in one strike. Neither seemed at all exhausted, bear in mind this is an ichigo and Uryu before the training for the Soul Society Arc. Now this MC uses his ability on the basically the same thing, even though he is technically a captain class being minimum, and 1/4 his energy to do it? That is nothing but the author making a cool ability with no plan on proper scaling for the future, realizing they messed up, but still liking the idea, and just saying: uhhhh it costs lots of energy so it's nerfed now, I don't need to think anymore.
The ability, however, wasn't perfect: its energy consumption was its biggest drawback, followed by its conditions. Just one use against Gillians drained his Reiryoku by nearly a quarter. The efficiency would be even worse if he tried to control stronger Hollows. The ability wouldn't work if his opponent repelled his Reiatsu with a greater concentration of Reiryoku.
Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde
Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter
What would you "oppress" the pressure limit of the heart so it can collapse? I still think from your above explanation you don't exactly get how oppression is used. The effect your going for is cool, but the title and name of the ability does not reflect it well, based on the very definition of the word.
He could technically raise anyone's heartbeat and destroy their heart. An instant death that would require immense Reiryoku varying from individual to individual.
Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde
Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter
I think you misunderstood what the term oppression actually means, and thus this ability just sounds dumb.
[Aspect of Death (Oppression): Oppression crushes all by infallible authority. With the power of oppression, you can heighten any aspect of a physical body, be it your surroundings or a part of your enemy's body.
Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde
Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter
Well, two options here, if he's under 18, call the cops and have his parents arrested for throwing a minor out of the house and breaking the law, or if he's over 18, deal with it, man up, become someone 10x better then his dad and rub that in his face.
Grabbing Mike by the collar, his father threw him towards the door. "Get out and don't come back. I won't have you shaming us further. You're on your own from now on."
Sex System in Solo Leveling
Anime & Comics · MilkLover
Cool, more casual abuse. Didn't Chloe magically see Vahn was absurd and had issues, and her first action is to mess with and verbally abuse the abused child.Tbh I hate this authors characterization of the people in this story. The author needs to either actually talk to people or visit a mental health expert if they think more abuse can help someone who is abused speak out and get over their trauma.
Vahn wanted to interject, but he could feel Chloe's tail tapping his leg every time he tried to open his mouth. He decided to trust in her and began to slowly eat his meal. It was delicious...
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
No to the stalker midget. This is honestly creepy AF.
"Fine, but I want the closest room to Vahn-sama. I'll even pay the current resident to change rooms if necessary." For Lili, this was as far as she was willing to compromise. Even if she couldn't share the same room, being in the next room over was better than nothing. Plus, she would be able to hear if Vahn brought any company into his room without her notice...
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
She has no say in what a guest does if it's not breaking the law, and there is no law saying a guest in a party can't have another member over. BS is BS.
"I have to agree with Vahn. Even if the two of you are close, it's not appropriate for a young boy and girl to share the same room. If you have the money, you should lease your own room and visit whenever you have matters to discuss. Though keep in mind the walls are rather thin and there are other residents within the Inn." As she spoke the last words she gave a warning look at Lili who still seemed intent on getting the same room.
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
If you didn't do it, by definition, you are innocent.So random thot, GG go nxt.
" Just because you are saying you are not guilty, you think you are innocent?"
I Have Infinite Systems In The Immortal World
Eastern · starry8sword
This one
Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance
Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
Awesome, Akame ga Kill is coming to an end so we can get back to the world of Solo Leveling. I'm curious to see how you handle it since Sung Jin-Woo right now is a lot stronger than cannon.
ch 113 CHAPTER 104 END OF THE EMPIRE
Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
This is clearly four words, not one.
'I could do it.'
Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
Bruh, Chuni much?
"This is something I just learned from you and got right on the first try. This is the very definition of Shadow the Darkness that consumes all the Darkness left behind by primordial light."
Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
You clearly do. All that meditation has done nothing for self reflection.
Now, those just seem to be the wrong words, implying that I have some kind of hunger for power.
Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
Huge waste of space. This is the same as the author repeating what has been said in the last chapter and, in many cases, failing to wax poetically about it.Actually, write something to further the story. Stop wasting time and inflating your word count.
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Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
Yes, but it seems the author has zero memory and doesn't understand how numbers work.
"Even if he were to wait one week for him to grow, It will be difficult for him to match up to our pace of battle. Our goal is to be first in the combat assignment. I don't think Tyrion is the best candidate! Why don't we do this? I have some ties with Xeniz. If you feel uncomfortable asking him, I'll do the invitation. How about that?"
I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
Fantasy · RagingArtPunk