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Hello, y'all for those people who wanna good review read this:- First of all the writing Quality is good maybe u can find a few mistakes here and there but that won't affect your reading journey. Secondly, we got the story development was amazing although it is a little slow in the first 5 chapters cause the world-building. Thirdly, regarding the character design I have some notes about it, the mc was a weak boy who always got bullied and then he got kidnapped by aliens and he turned into one cool but what I haven't understood was how he accepted all this easily. and in last the world's background, I can describe it in one sentence" diligent about it"

keep going Author we are waiting for your book❤