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ch 126 Fugaku Destroyed Box - bonus chapter

I Am Fugaku Uchiha

I Am Fugaku Uchiha

Anime & Comics · stylish_slayer

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I came to the city of FrostRoar and bought some of the materials needed for the isolation of the coming months. I went to the first blacksmith, but he soon judged me as a poor boy and didn't pay attention to me, as I was poorly dressed and a child. Of course, I left after that; I felt like punching that face. Father, I don't know why, but lately, my blood easily explodes, and I seem like an uncontrolled wolf; I feel my body burning with a cold and boiling sensation at the same time, strange, isn't it? I can't explain. When I left, I found that bard right after; I continued my way through the city and found a novice blacksmith with a sad story. His name is William, who had to flee from the Vale Arryn to seek shelter in the north because his family fought with a larger house, vassals of Jon Arryn, and were killed in the confrontation. I offered him 4 moons to stay with me for gold coins, and he accepted; it was even too much for me, an 8-nameday-old child to build armor for 5 giants, so I offered him a job as an extra hand. Leaving the blacksmith to prepare for the journey and say goodbye to the rest of his family in the city, I went to a leather shop and bought more material that I needed. You must be wondering how I got money for all this; I can understand that an eight-nameday-old child with gold coins in his pocket is a bit suspicious, but I didn't steal, I swear! I swear by all the old gods. I have some special skills and can command animals like the Wargs of legends and see their memories. Not only that, but I can also detect metals in the ground, whether beneath it or on the surface of a considerable area.

Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT

Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT

Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague

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I had never seen this analogy, I thought it was excellent

So I was not sad or regretting my death, but I do wonder how it happened. There was no accident or sickness as far as I remember. As a matter of fact I can't remember anything, similar to trying to remember the exact time when you fell asleep. It is at the tip of your tongue, but you can't pinpoint it exactly.

Harry Potter: outlier

Harry Potter: outlier

Book&Literature · ViolentCloud

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ch 64 Ch.64 Ladies Agreement!

Hp: The Outcast

Hp: The Outcast

Movies · confused4you

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Upon opening the door, Jenny immediately hugged Ianthe tightly as said "I'm glad you're okay. I was worried about you when we didn't hear from you." in this style it would be much easier to understand who is speaking and still maintain a separation between the MC and the other characters. But since it's still the beginning, I'll read a little more and see if you've changed anything as the chapters go by.

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Walking Dead: Futa

Walking Dead: Futa

TV · Elijah_Salmon

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this would be a point where it should be written as her seeing the scene or as a narrator describing

Rick: walking closer to the door, I jump back when something starts banging against it and hearing moaning sounds as the banging against the door gets more violent.

Walking Dead: Futa

Walking Dead: Futa

TV · Elijah_Salmon

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