Webnovel Author: Amera_Mee - Novel Collection

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Chapter 1's conclusion: It was pleasant, and I enjoyed it, it feels immersive, and as I preferably don't like to have world history at the start it didn't make me hesitate nor did it feel awkward. U have an enjoyable writing style.

ch 0 1 Prologue

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Fantasy · TofSpades

Amera_Mee

4d

Commented

So a quick transmigration novel?

[Librarian's Gift (S): User will be able to choose a story from the 'Mental Library' which they would like to conquer. Once the choice has been made, the user will be transmigrated to that world, to carry out the 'Quest' conditions. In completion of all conditions set, User will receive rewards and return to their world. However, failure to complete the conditions will lead in punishments.]

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Fantasy · TofSpades

Amera_Mee

4d

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Indeed, so useless, throw it in the trash, highly recommend.

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Fantasy · TofSpades

Amera_Mee

4d

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After the Xandarians - an extraterrestrial race - had suddenly appeared on Earth, declaring war on the humans, large portals accompanied their arrival, called dungeons. The existence of the Xandarians had forced planet Earth to birth the magical essence known as Mana. These portals led to different dimensions where vast kinds of monsters resided; allowing these portals to remain open for too long would lead to dungeon breaks, letting these ferocious beasts loose into the world to wreck havoc.

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Fantasy · TofSpades

Amera_Mee

5d

Replied to YourNemeSis

O0h, yeah, I do remeber now, Ash is a battle manic so the moment he started fighting at his fears disappeared. Should have made that part clearer.

"You're not taking all the glory." Ash flashed him a big, toothy smile.

Transmigrated into my sister's novel

Fantasy · Amera_Mee

Amera_Mee

5d

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Im not sure, let me check

"You're not taking all the glory." Ash flashed him a big, toothy smile.

Transmigrated into my sister's novel

Fantasy · Amera_Mee

Amera_Mee

9d

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Fumiko and Koi?

"Thank you, Miss Fumiko" As she cut the phone and walked towards Koi, who was waiting for her, she finally began heading to the directions as instructed by Miss. Fumiko and Koi thought,

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Urban · Sageash

Amera_Mee

9d

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Roaring ? Why?

"Miss. Fumiko!! Where is the vegetable and meat section in the Supermarket near the station!?" Airi roared into the phone in a hurried manner, and Miss Fumiko, who was tucking her child to sleep, felt a sense of urgency as she asked,

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Urban · Sageash

Amera_Mee

9d

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University repeated twice is awkward

"It is not that… actually, this is my classmate, who got late for admission and wasn't able to get his uniform from University. I want you to custom make a university uniform for him", Airi spoke as she presented Koi, and the shopkeeper's eyes shined,

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Urban · Sageash

Amera_Mee

9d

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Ryu?

"I am sorry…" he said in a low voice, and Airi couldn't help it anymore; her hand moved on their own as she patted Ryu,

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Urban · Sageash

Amera_Mee

9d

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Not sure if I should laugh or cry

Airi, who was taken aback by Koi's sudden loud voice, felt taken aback. She was about to shout,

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Urban · Sageash

Amera_Mee

9d

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Koi's gulping need to be in a new line.

"Oii, if you mentioned this to anyone at NGO…. You know what would happen, right" Koi gulped as he remembered the conversation last night and nodded,

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Urban · Sageash

Amera_Mee

9d

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Incomplete paragraph

'But you always scold me!!' thinking that, he moved his hand towards the wall where he saw what he thought was a switchboard. But before he could turn on the,

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Urban · Sageash

Amera_Mee

9d

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How is it? Comfortable, right?

"How is it comfortable, right?" Airi asked. Her voice was lower than she usually speaks, and her body was filled with comfort to her core. Seeing her like this, Koi gulped a bit, but he couldn't deny the truth.