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Most of the suggestions have lacked an Antagonistic spark... Why not grab someone who is nominally a villain and see if they can become a hero? Ganondorf Dragmire

Not only did it feel artificial, but the backstory to it feels primed and ready to generate unpleasant issues. "His mother knew she was a devil and was trying to live among the mundane - what killed her so easily?" - With a 'lost bloodline' like the Sabnock, the Satans are liable to dig too deep and uncover the lies. If the MC is an Atavism born of an unknowing half-breed, it's a different story.... Unless you're actually planning on the MC getting caught in lies or the whole political bs-line plot, then sidestepping it is better than leaving it as a potential future plot hole.... Political plots aren't generally fun though.

The stacking of power systems and tropes is starting to feel a bit bloated. The way the whole "oooh, I'm a Sabnock nao" is introduced to Sera feels forcibly inserted to the chapter with the immediate denial and just doesn't feel believable with how the MC goes about it... It would probably be more believable if the MC said "I dunno where this came from, but look what I can do!" rather than what feels like a forced lie.

RIP Goetia

Yeah, a lot of others, but Authors usually avoid Naruto and One Piece because they can't really solve the issues in a month... well, not without nuking the villages and blowing up the Celestial Dragons.

Eh, shouldn't we assume the limitation is by rank? Even if the description doesn't mention it, I'd expect it to automatically fail on anything above SS rank - though that is admittedly fairly high.

Considering all the glove is supposed to do without Alchemy is create small sparks, shouldn't it technically always be useless unless the MC learns FMA Alchemy to match it?

Authors too often pick a story where they can resolve the entire plot within the month, narrowing down the options too easily. I kinda hope it's randomized from a reduced list or something - We at least know it should be restricted to only anime, so no video games popping up.

Okay, why is a peach epic? Is it a Peach of Immortality? Does it contain Momotarou? Is it the princess of the Mushroom Kingdom? ... Why are there so many Peach-es?

Why do I automatically feel like the MC will get one of the "damaged" summons, like Jack the Ripper or Tamamo-no-Mae? They're still powerful no doubt, but... They're mentally scarred.

It's actually a really common misconception in the Chinese fanfics poking at x-men; they automatically apply Wuxia logic where having either telepathy or telekinesis means full psychic. His hoverchair just adds to the confusion... So odds are, this was influenced by that... Annoying.

Did he seriously forget about his Dovahkiin nature?