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i really dislike how short every chapter is and on top of that in the beginning he definitely knew the plot and story and characters but you’ve retconned it so he knows nothing or he became stupid. it kind of kills the story and the short chapters kills the pacing tbh
ch 25 Conclusion
DxD: The Illusion Killer
Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing
i think that binding vow is to only say what your technique is and how it works and stuff like that and not screaming the name out
"Flaming Spear," I uttered, although it wasn't necessary to speak the name of the technique, but I couldn't resist... Besides, there was always this feeling that by shouting the name of my "skill," it became stronger.
JJK: Red Priest Pathway
Anime & Comics · amattsu
i would say keep it different because i feel like the magic systems are way too different to be mixed together. i would say if you want it in dxd make it another school or magic rather than blend them together
8.) I want to mix up Toaru's magic system with DxD Magic system. Will that be alright?
DxD: The Illusion Killer
Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing
i would say make it like the magical side in the anime where in the final season they tried to take his arm off him to use its power, this could lead to having him using the power like in the final fight of the anime. seriously watch that fight again it’s really cool
4.) How will the supernatural world treat Kamijou if they ever learn of his existence?
DxD: The Illusion Killer
Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing
i think gods in dxd logic are alive because of belief so you can’t really kill them forever but i would say make IB weaken them maybe not all the way down to human power level with only one touch maybe make it take a few and grim reapers make them get bodied
3.) What effects will Imagine Breaker have on Gods and Grim reapers?
DxD: The Illusion Killer
Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing
so this might be too OP how you implement it but i think a final weapon that would be cool to have as a summon would be the Black Barrel from the nasuverse. it’s ability is to measure the life(?) of an object and shoot out the same amount of energy to kill it so like our earth has a lifespan of billions of years so the barrel would shoot out the same energy to destroy the earth. now in the fgo game it takes time to acquire a target then to get a read on the lifespan and even to shoot it needs a demi-servant with a command spell so it’s pretty much a final shot and you get it only once.
ch 0 3 Questioning the Gun
JJK : With a Shotgun in Jujutsu Kaisen
Anime & Comics · Ariseto
it’s not the mountain so it’s sandor
"Robb, this is Ser Gregor Clegane. He's the one that saved me. When Stannis was attacking Kings Landing, he took me away on horseback. Bringing me here. We tried to meet you in Riverrun, but you had already retaken Winterfell when we arrived."
A Song of Ice and Fire: Raenon Targaryen
Book&Literature · easyread
i like the idea of devils being spiritual/supernatural bodies because god created angels from his power and lucifer created devils with his power so fallen angels are also spiritual beings. however i would also say any half species will be physical beings, also i think yokai are just animals becoming special so i think yokai will be physcial beings. but i also don’t like the idea of him becoming one punch man and deleting beings out of existence so maybe make it like getting hit hurts their souls and weakens them and it depends on their strength how weak they become. also you could make this like jjk where there’s conditions to delete supernatural out of the world so like the average devil, angels, fallen angels will take 2-3 hits to be deleted and scale it up.
Are the supernatural beings in DxD spiritual beings or do they possess physical bodies? Knowing how devils and fallen angels can give birth, I assume they have physical bodies but isn't that a contradiction?
DxD: The Illusion Killer
Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing
i really love that idea of if a devil is physical or supernatural bodies even if it’s an OP one hit kill it’s balanced with it being attached to a normal human. i really hope he doesn’t just randomly become one punch man. also have you read the manga and light novel so you can know the power with in imagine breaker
ch 0 2 Right Hand of Magic Killing
DxD: The Illusion Killer
Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing
this makes sense i mean religion especially old time religion only has two options. death or saying it’s the divine intervening in mortal matters.
"But let us not be swayed by rumor or speculation," the High Septon urged, his voice resolute. "For the will of the Seven is beyond mortal comprehension, and it is not for us to judge the boy or his purpose. Instead, let us trust in the wisdom of the divine and remain steadfast in our devotion."
A Boy in the great game(dropped)
TV · greatcheesemaster
i hope his arc is trying to find freedom because in this feudal system he will always be chained down no matter how big his dragon is or how high he can fly. he will always be chained down due to his families. it could be intresting
Honestly, it was a great day. The feeling of riding a dragon… it's… addicting… exhilarating… and I want more, the feeling of freedom…
House of The Dragon: Reincarnated as Daemon Targaryen's Son
TV · idiotic_writer
you know from the books a king cutting themselves with the throne historically has shown that the king won’t be king for long
"Here I go," I muttered, taking my… rightful place on Throne….and I felt powerful, I felt finally at peace because the Game was over, I felt…pain… wait pain? "I think I stabbed my arm…. with one of the blades,"
Game of Thrones: The Prideful One.
TV · CORNBRINGER
i kind of hope those two meet up because it would be nice and it might lead to some more interesting fight scenes and funny moments
ch 14 Chapter 13 - New battle strategy.
Kumo desu ga, Nani ka? - Edit System
Anime & Comics · ParodyGirl
man is this author a retard or something because this one idiot can’t write a single chapter without any mistakes
As he begins to unbutton his pants Sukuna has watched long enough blitzing out the mans shadow Sukuna draws the bident his father gifted to him 'earth shatterer' not wasting time Sukuna beheads the evil man in a split second.
ten shadows in Percy Jackson
Anime & Comics · amarril14
the biggest problem with this “wEaK t0 StrOnG” story is that most(99.9999%) authors just have them weak and then the “train” for 2 days and become strong or even worse they “train” off screen for 2 months and then we just see them come back and then they’re instantly strong. i mean this to be constructive so you don’t do these dumb things because every weak to strong story goes down that route of making the MC weak af and stupid but then they train for a week and instantly they’re the strongest because of it.
ch 16 Addressing the Criticisms
In Marvel As Dante
Movies · RaedaX_1
this is legit ass the characters are so stiff and basically dead. all dialogue is awful it feels like it was written by children who can’t understand characters. then we the system which is the stupidest idea to put into a story like this. honestly nothing good was in this the characters are ass the whole world building is god awful and the story is trash.
HOTD- Family above All
Book&Literature · Vencha