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I think the pace is quite good. What i would hope for is a more systematic way of choosing soultraits after he is a higher lifeform. He is now i a position where he has hundreds of soultraits and procure even more - so he should analyze what exactly he need and fix his flaws.

[A/N: Hello there, the author is back in the game. I don't want to bother anyone for too long, but I think it has been a while since I asked y'all what you think about the story's progress. I would love to hear what you think about the story and what y'all think will happen in the near future. Will everything be alright, or will his presence in the Nest cause problems? What do you want to see? I'm curious to know what y'all would wish to read about.

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

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nevermind xD

Adam looked down and saw a pale hand protruding out from inside his chest. He coughed a mouthful of blood and when he raised his gaze, he saw the pale hand holding onto his heart.

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

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i cant stand his arrogance man ... one time is stupid but two Times is braindead........

Adam looked down and saw a pale hand protruding out from inside his chest. He coughed a mouthful of blood and when he raised his gaze, he saw the pale hand holding onto his heart.

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

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i have the feeling everything is a bit too forced, to extreme in this novel. especially the changing emotions

Magus Karl, on the other hand, had tears flowing down his face. He was moved by Adam's sense of sacrifice and duty. "Oh, I misjudge him. I thought he was a money-hungry, cunning fox."

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

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why kill them all? how is he going to find their base?

The person was wearing black robes and a pointy hat of the same color. Before the vampire spawn could mutter another word, the man in the pointy hat raised his foot and viciously stomped on her head!

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

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how would he know they are undead?

Listening to them, Adam sighed and thought inwardly, Even normal people like these two can feel the sinister vibe. As expected of those undead bastards, I guess.

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

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but wouldnt he know everything once Danny is rescued?

'Will he ask me for help? What if he does? Dealing with the Undead shouldn't be too hard with my strength, but will I be able to find out more about Danny's death?'

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

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when does it get better?

As they had moved, wasting time, Ryu wasn't entirely idle. He was analyzing the water vapor around him, something that came like second nature due to his Cosmic Seed. Unfortunately, because his Dao Heart was shattered, his progress was limited as though his talent was sitting behind a filter of some sort.

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Grand Ancestral Bloodlines

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