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1- The first is that I continue this and write boruto arc but as an author I can see easily that Azuma as a character doesn't have much to him, it's all about strength and acting emo, that's it, but I'll hold a vote on my p@treon either you want me to continue or not.
Anime & Comics · Navy_King
Pathetic... BRAIN DEAD MC! Im outta here!!
ch 0 6 Might Guy, The Great Treasure
Anime & Comics · nyawdao3
Does he even realise he posses uchiha bloodline and uchiha are meant to be cold and arrogant.
"He he, yes. Can you tell me a general information on this library, please?"
Anime & Comics · EternalDragonO0
Right now it just feels irritating. Let's just hope either the author filters it out or hopefully it grows on me and atleast becomes bearable. Bcos I'm liking the general idea of the story. It's JUST I YOUR FATHER IS GETTING IRRITATED BY THIS!!!!
"Ha ha, I, your father, finally mastered to climb the trees ah...…ah, aiyo, I'm falling to death."
Anime & Comics · EternalDragonO0
Imma outta here. Hiding Iden thing just made it boring. Goodbye!
ch 40 Chapter 40 - Konoha Crush
Anime & Comics · Odyin
MORE LIKE AUTHOR HAS SELF INSERTED HIMSELF IN THE STORY AND JUST COMMENTING ON WHATEVER IS HAPPENING...
'And so this become and Hajime no Ippo maybe I should teach Sakura the Dempsey Roll...food for thought'
Anime & Comics · Odyin
I get that author is being specific but still everything that is happening is just a recap of things we already know. We are not here for SELF INSERT MC!!!
It was almost night and Ren and his team were still rushing to Sakura's position while still trying to evade the various hazard of the forest and enemy ninja 'Shit we are still so far away, I won't make it in time' thought Ren, then he checked on Taro and Jiro 'And if we continue at this pace they won't be able to keep up, the battle before and this run took too much chakra from them'
Anime & Comics · Odyin
Why are you describing stuff everybody knows??!!
Kakashi Hatake has spiky silver hair often oriented to his left-side, dark grey eyes, and typically a relaxed and lazy expression. During the Third Shinobi World War, his left eye was damaged, leaving a vertical scar from the injury. The eye was shortly afterwards replaced with a Sharingan, which he covers with his forehead protector when he isn't using it.
Anime & Comics · Odyin
BRO ACCORDING TO YOU WHO AIN'T NERFED?
I think Haku was nerfed in Naruto. It is alleged that one of the mizukages was a Yuki. So, being trained by Zabuza since the age of 5. I expect him to be at least Tokubetsu jounin.
Anime & Comics · Drkest
EXACTLY 'use laugh or something like that'
"Hehehe… It seems that these Golden Flames are really doing the wonder!" – giggled Tsukihi.
Anime & Comics · Alex_Clive
At this point I'm doubting if the author swings the other way around...
Sasuke immediately blushed, "No… don't tell anyone!"
Anime & Comics · Alex_Clive
Bro the MC is nerfed to the extreme
Iwamoto had a cold sweat on his forehead seeing this series of attacks, as soon as the spikes, spears, and swords rushed towards him, he took a defending stance, and the short knife in his hands was like a gorgeous dancing Bella, accompanied by the sound of the harsh metal collision, he continuously diverted, deflected, blocked, dodged, and reflected back the iron sand objects.
Anime & Comics · Alex_Clive
BRO SOO MUCH INFO DUMP... YOU DON'T NEED TO DO THIS
' Coming back to topic the number of shinobi is still too large. In the fourth great ninja war , there were 80000 shinobis and samurais combined. So let's do some maths 80000 divided by six is close to 13500 shinobi per village now if you take in account genin were not allowed to participate in the war that means no genin and genin corps ( eternal Genin) which will double the number of shinobi per village to 27000. This number is after three great ninja wars and various calamities on each village like the Uchiha massacre , extinction of senju , bloody mist , hunt of kekkei genkai , bijus going crazy in their villages. Now that I look at it the number of shinobi is very less. Should I promote people to have more sex ?'
Anime & Comics · Charizard6
Amazing portrayal of genjutsu. Hats off author!
"You killed us" The zombified Dosu and Kin kept saying as they walked closer to their alive teammate.
Anime & Comics · lazarus898
Superman will cry!!
Finally, we arrived the sun wasn't really out today so I wasn't directly getting tortured, I swear if I could destroy the fucking sun I would.
TV · Booggie
He doesn't need an outfit since, he can transform into any appearance he wants. Also a bat instead of like a swarm of them. The protagonist doesn't sound cool at all. Honestly, autho you can do so much with this character. FINGERS CROSSED HOPEFULLY IMPROVES!!
I dropped onto one, my hand formed the shape of a hook as I yanked him back, the bottom of my mask was gone and my fangs were out.
TV · Booggie
I don't know. Just not into Inuzuka clan Jutsu
Yami's eyes become slits, his fingernails become claw like, and his canines' teeth lengthen.
Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
I would like to read a fanfic with Gojo Template with your writing style author.
ch 116 Poll Results and Update
Naruto: The Great Swordsman
Anime & Comics · Navy_King