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Please stop describing Naruto's tone of voice after every time he speaks.

"Radios, nice! That's gonna smooth things over," Naruto agreed, his voice oozing the kind of cool confidence that made the plan seem foolproof.

What If Naruto Had The Six Eyes & Limitless Curse Technique

Anime & Comics · hasnathh

Mt406

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I had my money on secret love child between Snape and Lily from an A U

ch 137 Chapter 137 : Memories 2

HP: Magic Punk

Book&Literature · kamidemond

Mt406

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Is Alexander not mad or upset with Rindo for her vote to remove the chairman ?

ch 116 Path

Food Wars: The Golden Hands

Anime & Comics · Doragon

Mt406

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I'm enjoying the story so far, but please don't make Gojo a slave to Yahikos' ideals or things like that. it would fit Gojo Satoru at all.

ch 13 The Kingdom of Roran

Naruto: Gojo Satoru Is The Strongest

Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin

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Okay, Alan's demeanor makes a lot more sense now. I just realized that his brothers, Christian and Braxton are the 2 characters in the Ben Affleck movie the Accountant.

ch 48 Chapter 48

Daily Drama (In American TV Shows)

TV · Maximus_Quill

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ok, so help me understand. Orion has absorbed the magic from several magical creatures, including a troll, unicorn, and a dragon. But he is still just barely level 2 even though he trains like 12+ hours a day? How is Nick so many levels ahead by only doing some dark rituals? Also, isn't Orion still absorbing magic passively just by being at Hogwarts?

ch 116 Chapter 116 : Infirmary

HP: Magic Punk

Book&Literature · kamidemond

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hard to understand. gojo is called like 7 different names in the first chapter. Sometimes, multiple different names in the same sentence of dialog by one person, and has some weird idioms that make no sense.

Konoha: The Opening Fusion Gojo Satoru

Anime & Comics · ShihaoGamer

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The story so far is good, with only 8 chapters so far. the writing quality is also good, with no major grammatical errors like some stories. the plot seems to have a lot of room to develop, and I hope the author continues to upload chapters! The only thing that hurt the rating is that we don't know what the MC looks like or what his background is in this new life is yet.

Rebirth: Counterterrorism in America

Movies · INIT

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thanks for the chapter, but can you please not use so many ------ to break up the chapter. I listen to your book using the audio feature on webnovel, and it really kills the listening experience.

ch 31 Vol2-Chapter8-Chaos in the capital