What should I change about this red eyed man
ch 107 Chapter 107 Master Dargon
Others · Bharati_Singha_7905
Thanx for your advice
Fantasy · Jhaydun
Man I had changed my summary and I am going to add some gods like being to make the story more interesting. If you have more advice pls comment because of your advice I can see my book's are becoming better
Umm how many chapters have you read?
The main character is in the continuing chapters keep reading his name is Don Stephen and he is the son of Maclony
Realistic · Bharati_Singha_7905
Bro can you please teach me. I want to improve my books . You can also give me an advice
Ohk I will see about it
I had made changes on my mistake now you can read from chapter no 1 and see the changes
Rewrite In which chapter you think we should do a rewrite . Waiting for your reply
I will see about it man
Ok then I will write a summary about it Thanx for your advice
Thanx for your advice I will try to improve
You should read the book first man
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What should I change about this red eyed man
ch 107 Chapter 107 Master Dargon
Ruthless Business man
Others · Bharati_Singha_7905