Daoist7bnEpR - Profile

To begin with, this is one of the best fanfiction on mha.The quality of the letter is at a very good level, the chapters are long and prescribed.Sometimes there is a narrative not from the main character, it allows you to open up better, other characters.Dialogue and transition between personalities are good (not the same as pov1, pov2, pov3 and very disgusting transitions).The character and his personality are well revealed.This is the first time I've seen the "reverse quirk", and the idea is quite interesting, but I see that our main character should be stronger if you look at the soundboard and how quickly he achieved it, or is it just the STRENGTH of the MAIN CHARACTER (I think you understand what I mean).I really liked the story and the concept.The hero of the recipe has a childhood (if you can call it that, of course) which is extremely rare for him. they don 't spend much time . Keep it up.(English is not my native language, so if you notice mistakes, please don't throw your slippers)

the story is developing quite well.at the time of chapter 11, I have no claims.the idea is not new, but I rarely see a character fall into the time of Minato.(English is not my native native language)