SaraSaavedra

This story is not boring at all. From the moment you read the first chapter, it steals your attention and it's hard not to want to keep reading. Excellent writing style. Highly recommended.

Marigold, A New World

Fantasy · Maxemillian

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Posted

The synopsis is very well written and serves the purpose of encouraging the reader to keep reading. It's a story with an interesting plot and has great potential. I definitely want to keep reading more chapters.

The Zombie Games

Fantasy · Coffee_Stories

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Posted

This is definitely a story with a very intriguing plot. From the first chapter it catches you with the curiosity to know what James will discover. I love your novel. Highly recommended.

Web of Secrets

Realistic · Cobruh

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Posted

It is a cool story, with which adolescents who are beginning to form their group of friends will identify. It's good that you dared to write a story with this type of plot! Highly recommended.

The Fantastic Five.

Teen · Prajnya Shriyan

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Replied to Dianos_Elle

Thanks for your review!

After Dreaming About You

Urban · SaraSaavedra

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Posted

The plot is interesting and I think it is attached to real life cases. I like your writing style. I hope it continues to have a good development. Good job so far!

Serendipitous Romance

Urban · DayDreamer_08

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Posted

With the information that the synopsis offers about this story, it is enough to want to continue reading more. The plot is interesting and I think you have the potential to develop it well. Keep writing!

System: Vampire Bloodline - The Vampire's True Desires

Fantasy · Dianos_Elle

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Posted

The plots about love between polar opposites are always very engaging and you are definitely doing a great job with this story. I look forward to reading more chapters. I recommend it!

Love or Truth

Fantasy · prettygirl_93

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Posted

I love this combination of sadness and action that has this story. The plot surrounds you from the moment you read the synopsis. It can definitely become a success. Keep writing!

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SaraSaavedra

1yr

Posted

Hello! Congratulations on your first novel! The theme of the novel seems interesting to me and invites the reader to continue wanting to know what will continue to happen in the following chapters. Honestly, it is a novel with a lot of potential. You're doing it right! I would only advise you two issues: I think you should improve the structure of the synopsis (a lot of white space) and I think it is not necessary to use so many "hahaha" in the dialogues.

His revenge on me

Fantasy · shreya_ki

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Posted

I love the use of biblical terms in a story about a loop in time. I have to say that despite the fact that the synopsis is simple, it ends up catching you. It is definitely a story that promises to be a success. I want to continue reading more chapters.

Doomed to Eternity

Fantasy · Coyle

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Replied to Su_Jeong

Thanks for that correction!

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My Unborn Son

Fantasy · SaraSaavedra

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Replied to Su_Jeong

Thanks for your review!

My Unborn Son

Fantasy · SaraSaavedra

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Replied to Su_Jeong

He has not returned. It's just a memory

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My Unborn Son

Fantasy · SaraSaavedra

SaraSaavedra

1yr

Replied to Su_Jeong

Hi! Yes, it's the same house that he gave her when they got married. The point is that when Roberto gave it to her, he had assured her that no one had lived in that house before, in fact, in this chapter she remembers that she had to take care of decorating it from scratch, BUT, the unexpected visit from her friend Susana, makes her doubt that perhaps that house had been inhabited before he gave it to her. Thank you for your comments. They are very important to me.