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It would be great if you added a classic storage technology with some security improvements.

Here I leave some technology ideas for the fic of this video game called VANQUISH, if you are interested in adding the high-tech costumes of the game characters, the robots that appear, grenades or the weapons used by the main character, which I think would be quite good in your story.

VANQUISH TRAJE AVANZADO: ARS

VANQUISH TRAJE AVANZADO: BOGEY

Will the MC have the powers of generator rex? I searched and only found an abandoned fic where he had his powers but nothing else. It would be great if they included the nanaits to the story in addition to their many applications and if not at least make another fanfiction.

I think it would be better to equip Dante with weapons from his other versions. In addition to allowing you to improve them with souls and themselves after reaching certain limits to spend them. You could also give it a transformation like in the games, giving it, in addition to the devil trigger, an angel trigger or a fusion of the two, I don't know. Avoid giving it too many power-ups, the story goes at a good pace, let the MC develop slowly and not as fast as other authors do in their stories, these are my thoughts and ideas, I hope they are taken into account and that they have been helpful.

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Pls do more arcs

It does not seem to me, I mean how much age difference the MC has with Padme, I think it is better to keep Padme and Anakin as a couple. In addition, do not stand so many to Harem Almejos 2 or 3 Maximo to have more than that would spoil the continuity of the story for the time that the MC has to happen with each of them. My opinion is that you only keep Yenali and Serra or you can also add to Ayla but that is no more, please take this into account 2 or 3 no more, related and the story will focus on the romantic relationship that in the Changing plot of the original fee.

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si bien la historia es buena el chat de la gente de esta historia hace que sea mas interesante y saber sus reacciones ante las situaciones del personaje, haciendo mas divertidas los cap. asi que porfavor no los quites.

I'm all for the happy ending, though I'd like the birth parents to get their fair share of bullet punishment. Regarding Bullet joining the committee, I wouldn't agree with that unless Nezu was there as a means to prevent him from being used as a machine to kill anyone just for the sake of it.

acabo de ponerme al dia con la historia y estubo bien hasta ahora. sin embargo en mi opinion no deberias añadirle mas poder de lo que ya tiener el personje, quiero decir añadirle cosas relacionada con los elementos es una cosa pero otras como habilidades especiales con sharingan o rinnegan ya es irse demaciado lejos la verdad, el control con la sangre puede aumentar en gran medida sus habilidades fisicas junto con sus habilidades de aura, tener al personaje demaciado op seria demasiado sub realista para la historia y seria demaciado aburrido de para seguir leyendo la historia. ademas deberias equilibrar alreto de los personajes al menos, ha muchas historia de MHA donde el personaje esta muy por encima de los demas. deberias considerar eston puntos si sigues con la historia