Do not use LAZY to describe Brick. Stop using BLUSH to describe Blossom. AI SLOP! It makes me I'll!!! In short: similar adverbs repeat again and again and again and again and again and again.... Irritating, right? And the Brick acts the same, always, and blossom reacts same, always. Kinda... Weak plot and writing, with ai-issues.
+5
Tftc
Yup, we noticed. Tftc 🙌
In his previous world, there were world leaders who would indirectly enslave entire nations and pull their neighbors into unnecessary wars just to profit from them in order to maintain their status and way of living.
Muzan: Conquering multiverse.
Anime & Comics · nkcthereaper
Tftc, you can release chapters slower, but make them bigger please. 2 chapters can be easily merged into 1, moreover, these 4 chapters can be merged into 1, and it will be descent size for chapter.
TL;DR: The book is cool. 3 star comments are so biased and unreasonable that it makes me feel ill. The main hero feels more like an antihero indeed, killing bad guys and causing chaos here and there, though from a police and hero side he can be considered a villain, cause he damage objects and mentally torture innocent people too. My main issues with this fanfiction are the overly short chapters and the fact that everyone overreacts to yet another looney. And while the author isn't a novice, it sometimes feels that way. He describes the MC as a perfect human—he's handsome (which is pointed out way too many times), all-knowing, and mysterious. While that kind of praise makes sense in a livestream chat, it feels cringe when it comes from a TV news broadcast. On the news, he should be depicted as a terrorist; they should be focusing on the danger and damage he caused, not his personality. It feels like the story is romanticizing his actions, which would have serious legal consequences for a TV studio in the real world
Mean at the start of the story, before time skip, cause some nerds will point that he was genin until became hokage or smth like that
So there you go, Acnologia, is not even Genin level in Naruto.
Systematic Shinobi: Multiverse Mayhem
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
Acnologia can easily kill a genin Naruto, and what you're doing here is just sophistry
So there you go, Acnologia, is not even Genin level in Naruto.
Systematic Shinobi: Multiverse Mayhem
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
Tftc
Muzan: Conquering multiverse.
Anime & Comics · nkcthereaper