DBSH

DBSH

male LV 4

Yes, girl on picture, 'cause I appreciate beauty

2023-02-27 Joined Ukraine
Badges 4

Moments 274
DBSH
DBSH
DBSH
DBSH
6 days ago
Commented

Ok with first, but why have you made second ability this op? I do not understand. Ok, he can't be erased with time shenanigans, it's ok. But immortal? Invincible? He cannot be even bothered with strong emotions. This suck on many levels. Invincible is cool cause while he is almost immortal, and durable as hell, he is still mortal, still can suffer from physical stuff and mental stuff (I'm talking about emotions, not telepathy), and this makes him someone alive. This piece of shit is just a paper, plastic Ken which will fulfill all your wishes with no effort. Such a waste...

DBSH
DBSH
6 days ago
Replied to Marveller

😅, well, I can't help it feels kinda cringe to me. Especially, when people in sophisticated manner describe actions of psycho. There is a sense of exaltation in moments where it is inappropriate.

DBSH
DBSH
9 days ago
Replied to DVA

Exactly, 💯. I hate when mc out of nowhere get bunch of op skills and moreover - do nothing with it. I mean look at the plot, guy speak to bird, but a house and intrude girl's apartment. He can do all the same without telekinesis and shitty invisibility, which shouldn't work omo. I do not blame him for 🍇 starlight, but I haven't seen nothing good in book either. Good start with fish telepathy he ruined instantly. Telepathy not equal to telekinesis, and telekinesis is not equal to unlimited power and unbounded abilities. It's just ridiculous.

DBSH
DBSH
DBSH
10 days ago
Posted

10 out of 10, it's right in my taste. Good mc, not too op, sweat relationship with others, no unnecessary drama, good pacing. I like it, I hope it'll have 200+ chapters and story will have it's ending.

DBSH
DBSH
12 days ago
Replied to TheFraud

Gamer's body and mind is a shitty abilities,. it's good he doesn't have them. But absence of stats is confusing

DBSH
DBSH
DBSH
17 days ago
Replied to Michael_Perez_2643

I hope he will not. Better Ethan being cooked, than this cliche. And for some reason I feel like Gotham gonna burn in the end

img