DBSH

DBSH

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Yes, girl on picture, 'cause I appreciate beauty

2023-02-27 Joined Ukraine
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DBSH
3 days ago
Commented

Do not use LAZY to describe Brick. Stop using BLUSH to describe Blossom. AI SLOP! It makes me I'll!!! In short: similar adverbs repeat again and again and again and again and again and again.... Irritating, right? And the Brick acts the same, always, and blossom reacts same, always. Kinda... Weak plot and writing, with ai-issues.

DBSH
DBSH
5 days ago
Replied to QinShiHuang

+5

DBSH
DBSH
DBSH
6 days ago
Commented

Yup, we noticed. Tftc 🙌

DBSH
DBSH
7 days ago
Commented

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In his previous world, there were world leaders who would indirectly enslave entire nations and pull their neighbors into unnecessary wars just to profit from them in order to maintain their status and way of living.

Muzan: Conquering multiverse.

Muzan: Conquering multiverse.

Anime & Comics · nkcthereaper

DBSH
DBSH
7 days ago
Commented

Tftc, you can release chapters slower, but make them bigger please. 2 chapters can be easily merged into 1, moreover, these 4 chapters can be merged into 1, and it will be descent size for chapter.

DBSH
DBSH
7 days ago
Posted

TL;DR: The book is cool. 3 star comments are so biased and unreasonable that it makes me feel ill. The main hero feels more like an antihero indeed, killing bad guys and causing chaos here and there, though from a police and hero side he can be considered a villain, cause he damage objects and mentally torture innocent people too. My main issues with this fanfiction are the overly short chapters and the fact that everyone overreacts to yet another looney. And while the author isn't a novice, it sometimes feels that way. He describes the MC as a perfect human—he's handsome (which is pointed out way too many times), all-knowing, and mysterious. While that kind of praise makes sense in a livestream chat, it feels cringe when it comes from a TV news broadcast. On the news, he should be depicted as a terrorist; they should be focusing on the danger and damage he caused, not his personality. It feels like the story is romanticizing his actions, which would have serious legal consequences for a TV studio in the real world

DBSH
DBSH
11 days ago
Replied to DBSH

Mean at the start of the story, before time skip, cause some nerds will point that he was genin until became hokage or smth like that

So there you go, Acnologia, is not even Genin level in Naruto.

Systematic Shinobi: Multiverse Mayhem

Systematic Shinobi: Multiverse Mayhem

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

DBSH
DBSH
11 days ago
Commented

Acnologia can easily kill a genin Naruto, and what you're doing here is just sophistry

So there you go, Acnologia, is not even Genin level in Naruto.

Systematic Shinobi: Multiverse Mayhem

Systematic Shinobi: Multiverse Mayhem

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0