Very good story with nice flow. The only thing that gave this a lower grade was the comic book words that express a action or feeling. Those could have been written in ta sentence instead.
Urban · OnyxNymph
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Very good story with nice flow. The only thing that gave this a lower grade was the comic book words that express a action or feeling. Those could have been written in ta sentence instead.
You're My Mate
Urban · OnyxNymph