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ch 0 1 I Want My Refund!
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ch 53 The Ball
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ch 53 The Ball
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ch 44 Always The Outcast
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ch 20 The Past Never Dies
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ch 18 My Turn To Hurt
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ch 12 A King’s Mistake
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ch 0 7 We Are No Longer Slaves
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ch 0 7 We Are No Longer Slaves
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ch 0 7 We Are No Longer Slaves
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ch 0 6 A Choice To Make
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ch 0 4 Prisoners Of War
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ch 0 1 The Eye Of The Prey
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ch 0 1 The Eye Of The Prey
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I feel like several of your critiques would have been different had you read a few more chapters. You do make a few good points (like forgetting names) but some of those points (such as the relationship with Gunter) has plot behind it and reason. You’ve articulated pretty well on just about everything with the exception of the character design. What don’t you like exactly? Why do you find the tie in of the politics confusing? Why do you feel the plot is slow?
Banished From My Village And Mated To The Cursed Heir And His Brothers
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