Webnovel Author: DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Posted

I found the story quite interesting at first. I liked the character and his characteristics. I hope that when I read the next chapters, I can better understand the relationships made by the character.

The Mockery of Fate

Fantasy · Narashie

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Commented

I just didn't quite understand what this competition is about.

ch 0 2 Competition

The Mockery of Fate

Fantasy · Narashie

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Commented

I really liked the beginning of the story and the change in the outside environment also caught my attention. When she leaves the ball and sees a mysterious group, an impactful scene transformation occurs.

ch 0 1 We meet again

The Mockery of Fate

Fantasy · Narashie

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Replied to Anya_Voss

looks like the romance starts now

As the policeman reached out to grab her, Cheryl acted on instinct. She slammed her fist hard into his temple, stunning him. Before he could react, she had already taken down another officer, this time with the help of the ice cream man, who had swung his heavy scoop with surprising accuracy. For a moment, they stared at each other in shock, but then the ice cream man grinned. "Great shot!" he exclaimed. Cheryl couldn't help but laugh. "Yours wasn't bad either," she said.

The Mockery of Fate

Fantasy · Narashie

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Replied to Narashie

thanks for your review.

A life outside the city

Realistic · DaoistjgONB5

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Posted

I liked the introduction of the story and the character Ace. The characteristics of space and the development of the plot are interesting.

[BL] My Master , Your Wolf

Fantasy · redlady

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Commented

I liked this chapter. The main character, ace, when making dialogues with the gods, right after being reborn in another world, seems to be the beginning of the leverage of the character's power.

ch 0 1 I reincarnate.....and now what?!

[BL] My Master , Your Wolf

Fantasy · redlady

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Replied to redlady

thanks! and truth. The cover doesn't reflect the characteristic of ML now. But at the climax of the story, it will reflect a lot.

A life outside the city

Realistic · DaoistjgONB5

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Posted

Sorry buddy, I thought I had reviewed your story before. I remembered that I reviewed other works, but I had forgotten about yours. I'm reading the first few chapters. Thank you for understanding

The Romantic Cultivator

Eastern · Avidfan

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Posted

the story of LiNa's rebirth is very interesting. At first, it seems that she has become poor because of her parents' abandonment. Her relationship with her family was not worthy of well-being. I hope that in the next few chapters, she becomes a stronger person.

REBIRTH AND REVENGE

Fantasy · g_d

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Replied to Elementary519

I understood what you meant.

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A life outside the city

Realistic · DaoistjgONB5

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Replied to Avidfan

thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked chapter 10!

A life outside the city

Realistic · DaoistjgONB5

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Commented

I liked the introduction of LiNa's story. I will read the next chapters.

ch 0 1 Rebirth

REBIRTH AND REVENGE

Fantasy · g_d

DaoistjgONB5

10mth

Commented

I liked the introduction of the main character in the story. The name was also very creative.

Alone in her small apartment, Li Na was surrounded by empty takeout boxes and bills she couldn't afford to pay, she couldn't help but feel overwhelmed with sadness and regret. She had always wanted to make her parents proud, to live up to their expectations, but it seemed like nothing she did was ever good enough for them.