Excited for more chapters to come.
ch 25 Conclusion
Urban · Fixten
I have returned from my deep contemplation for the past 4 to 5 chapters to tell you Sir Theo that by the time you read this it will be the Holiday known as Fathers Day in our world (or the day after if the writer wants a holiday break), If the date also lines up in your world then, I wish you well this fathers Day Sir Theo.
ch 18 Guidance
Urban · Fixten
Sir Theo I agree with Twin_dragon13773's thoughts on the power of illusions being very strong in the right hands.
ch 14 Solving the Problem
Urban · Fixten
Howdy Theodore, nice to meet you. I'm a new reader and commenter who just recently found and got caught up with this story. I will try to interact with your story frequently to avoid a situation where no comments happen. I was thinking that it may become inconvenient at times to answer our questions out loud, and it may be useful to develop the ability to project your internal monologue to us. I know we will learn this eventually but I was curious if you could explain what exactly your daughter Mia's powers are, both from before and after obtaining the punk demon, I know that she can make Teddy bears that explode into smoke, and illusions, but I would like to know in more detail.
ch 0 9 First Fight
Urban · Fixten
I saw the text about the Spiffing Brit, and came to the comments to see how many people were talking about it, and you were the only one I could find. 😐
ch 29 Chapter 29 The Six Nen Categories
Movies · GnomeBob
Greetings Sir Theo, I have returned to comment on something that I have had on my mind for a long time now. Do we count as a system? A lot of signs are showing that point to yes, such as a probably magic screen with text, that only the person affected by it can see, it giving the affected person an advantage compared to others around them, and many more small things.
ch 42 Power System
I Can Read People's Comments
Urban · Fixten