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Ahmed_M_Oshey
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The fight from first person perspective feels weird and awkward, you should write fights from 3rd person or narrator perspective. Otherwise it's all good, nice chapter and cool ability, though <nightmare> doesn't really seem like a nightmare more like a cheat
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Only I Can See The End
Fantasy 路 Magecrafter
Wake up sunless, your nightmare is over 馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀
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Only I Can See The End
Fantasy 路 Magecrafter
Like when nami hits luffy, he somehow stop being rubber馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀
And, somehow, the bites hurt him! How?!
The Revenant King of Rubrum
Fantasy 路 MidnightMK
Duuuuuuude whyyyyy? Author what's up, why is this. This is him getting a slave just using different words because no complete stranger would sleep hugging each other. So this shouldn't happen
Mia slept right on my arm. Her steady breathing proved that she was still fast asleep, nowhere close to waking up.
One Last System
Fantasy 路 MotivatedSloth
He could have just refused to help her if he doesn't a slave. He will gain absolutely nothing from helping her. And he would be standing for his morale...and stuff.
"But what would you say about becoming my partner?"
One Last System
Fantasy 路 MotivatedSloth
Nice joke, mages and politician are similar in that they can change the world with world馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃憣
"Haah..." I released a deep sigh before heading for the stairs. There was no use cursing the reality. I wasn't some kind of mage or politician to change the world with my words alone.
One Last System
Fantasy 路 MotivatedSloth
The world couldron remind of harry potter, the potion class. Ahh Good times
He slowly guided the Qi to enter the cauldron and split it into 2 portions. Both portions of the Qi started to condense the powder into 2 separate balls.
Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
Games 路 Snoring_Panda
I keep hearing this a lot what do you mean by"forced" ?. What exactly is forced about it ?
The condition was a minimum combined age of 15,000. Because everyone in the grade was between the ages of 14 and 16 the way it worked out was 14,999. Which left room for a one-year-old to join.
Shadow Author
Fantasy 路 Zach_Lecher
Game of thrones
The word may have reached tens of million words and the novel doesn't always show the MC part but covers all the significant characters from his rival life story to some of his enemy life stories.
Parallel Memory
Fantasy 路 SomDxD
He should hate them. It makes no sense, if someone is attacking a person you love it's natural to hate them. ITS HUMAN REACTION.....blah..blah.iam tired if writing more馃槕馃檭
Leonel couldn't find it within himself to hate them. Even if they bore down on the only woman that had ever stirred his heart, he realized now how right he was not to kill them in a rage. These were men who deserved his respect. Even in the face of power so much greater than their own, they put everything they had on the line.
Dimensional Descent
Fantasy 路 Awespec
Reminds me of Garb luffys granfather
"Sigh, but you could have used the teleportation gate..." the guild member left behind said, watching Nathan take off towards Soran.
Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
Fantasy 路 Raos_IOI
This is very funny馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槶馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀
"I wish I could see a day when lord not only show the world his valour and might but also lead the kingdom to a prosperous era."
The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess
Fantasy 路 Mohitkumar
Hahaha
Knowing this, Heydon dared not play any tricks. Even an Earl was unable to escape, how could he, a mere viscount take this risk? Although he liked beauties, he liked his life even more.
Supreme Harem God System
Fantasy 路 SleepDeprivedSloth
Does this mean the night came? Or is this the for shadowing for.something or someone
While daydreaming and thinking about his advantages of reincarnation. Elric didn't seem to notice the strange shadow that enveloped his back.
I created Magic!
Fantasy 路 Ghost_Worker
I hate lighting abilities, they are too over used
Chapter 4 - Thunder
The Villain's Shopping System
Fantasy 路 NandoFalske