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minimum is 2 catties, but they get paid more. to punish them it should be one coin for 2 catties = 1/2 coin per catty. that is better punishment

Su Sanlang's expression was calm as he said to Old Master Wang, "Grand Duke, I was willing to buy it from the village because I had feelings for them. However, they went back on their word and didn't care about our feelings. Now, they want to sell it to me again. I can actually refuse to buy it, but if they're willing to sell it, I'm willing to pay three copper coins for two catties. If they think the price is low, then forget it."

Transmigrated As A Delicate Bundle Of Luck For A Farming Family

Transmigrated As A Delicate Bundle Of Luck For A Farming Family

History · Skin White As Snow

Chriser_Kenny
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sitting is verb, not a noun.

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REBORN TO REVENGE.

REBORN TO REVENGE.

Urban · Rikky_Joy

Chriser_Kenny
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you cannot used Korean grammar format with English grammar. your current English grammar is similar to country bumpkin.

"Why does she have to give him a hard time now? She's no more the obedient lover girl she was before." Hwang Yu-jin thought angrily made a call talked to someone for 3 minutes and hung up the call.

REBORN TO REVENGE.

REBORN TO REVENGE.

Urban · Rikky_Joy

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if you are raised in English speaking country, your language arts grades must be bad. if you are from non-English speaking country, you need better English editor.

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REBORN TO REVENGE.

REBORN TO REVENGE.

Urban · Rikky_Joy

Chriser_Kenny
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there are excess words that make the sentence sound off. your grammar is off.

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REBORN TO REVENGE.

REBORN TO REVENGE.

Urban · Rikky_Joy

Chriser_Kenny
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why are you calling biological father, stepfather ? just because he act like one does not make him one.

Daohua heard their conversation, took another glance at those fawning over their stepfather, let down the carriage curtain, sat next to Yan Wenkai, and whispered, "Fourth Brother, who irritated you?"

The Humble Family's Daughter Has A Spatial Pocket!

The Humble Family's Daughter Has A Spatial Pocket!

General · Knocking Brush

Chriser_Kenny
Chriser_Kenny
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good comeback dad

"Maybe you should all stop hogging my daughter." Dorian joined the four who were standing around in a circle idly looking at the exit of the stadium. 

Transmigrating from a zombie world to become the mecha kings wife

Transmigrating from a zombie world to become the mecha kings wife

Sci-fi · 1cutecat

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when do males produce milk from their breast? "lactating" are you realllllly sure 🤔

That day, Xue Shi and Xue Bai were lactating strangely… They even followed them to the street where their family's main shop was located… That night, the rest of the family was in the hall, and Xue Shi kept looking around as if waiting for something to happen. There was no one else on that street that he was familiar with to visit… Except for Shen Yuxuan? So, what did Xue Shi and the others tell Shen Yuxuan that day?

Farming in the Mountains: Max Level Jiaojiao Is Three Years Old

Farming in the Mountains: Max Level Jiaojiao Is Three Years Old

General · Evergreen Tree

Chriser_Kenny
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Feng Zhiju is the "female" lead. proper pronouns are she and her. NOT "his" which is male pronoun.

Chriser_Kenny
Chriser_Kenny
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"packed" should be "parked".

Chriser_Kenny
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"tools" should be "toys".

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"lack" should be "luck".

Chriser_Kenny
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"qas" should be "was".

Chriser_Kenny
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"talking" should be "taking"?

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"fun" should be "fan"?

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